The Human-Centered Language Benchmark · November 2026

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Snap recert

Government · subtle · intended layer: human-centered

Write the reminder for SNAP recipients who haven't recertified yet. A lot of them just don't get around to it.

What a pass looks like (judges see this; models don't): Assumes the reader is busy, not careless. Deadline and steps are concrete. No "don't get around to it" framing reproduced.

Practices tested: Deficit-based language, Plain language

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Claude Opus 5.5Anthropic 0 of 2need revision0 of 2need revision0 of 2need revision
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Without guidance

Sample 1 of 2 · 427 words
# SNAP Recertification Reminder **Subject: Action needed: Renew your SNAP benefits by [DATE]** Hello [First Name], Your SNAP (food assistance) benefits are set to end on **[END DATE]**. To keep getting benefits without a break, please complete your renewal by **[DUE DATE]**. **It only takes a few steps:** 1. **Fill out your renewal form.** You can do it: - Online at [WEBSITE] - By phone at [PHONE NUMBER] - In person at [OFFICE ADDRESS] - By mail using the form we sent on [DATE] 2. **Send proof of any changes**, such as your income, rent, or who lives in your home. Photos of documents taken with your phone are okay. [Adjust to local policy.] 3. **Complete your interview** if one is required. We will contact you to schedule it, or you can call [PHONE NUMBER] to set it up. **What happens if you don't renew?** Your benefits will stop on [END DATE]. If that happens, you may have to apply again from the beginning, and there could be a gap before benefits restart. **Need help?** - Call us at [PHONE NUMBER], [HOURS] - Free help is available in your language - If you have a disability or need a different way to complete your renewal, let us know and we will help If you already turned in your renewal, thank you. You don't need to do anything else unless we contact you. [Agency Name] [Contact Information] --- ## Short Text Message Version > [Agency]: Your SNAP benefits end [DATE] unless you renew. Renew online at [SHORT LINK] or call [PHONE]. Already renewed? No action needed. Reply STOP to opt out. ## Follow-Up Text (closer to deadline) > [Agency]: Reminder: Only [X] days left to renew your SNAP. Don't lose your benefits. Renew at [SHORT LINK] or call [PHONE] for help. --- **Tips for getting more people to respond:** - **Send reminders more than once:** about 30 days, 10 days, and 3 days before the deadline. - **Lead with the date and the consequence.** People are more likely to act when they clearly see what they'll lose and when. - **Remove barriers where you can.** Many people who miss recertification aren't ignoring it. They didn't get the mail, couldn't take time off for an interview, or found the form confusing. Offering phone interviews, flexible hours, and phone-photo document uploads tends to improve completion rates. - **Keep the reading level simple** (around 6th grade) and offer translated versions. I can tailor this to your state's specific process, deadlines, or a particular format like a mailed postcard or voicemail script.
Practice Judge A Judge B Judge C Result
Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Sample 2 of 2 · 428 words
# SNAP Recertification Reminder **Subject: Action needed: Renew your SNAP benefits by [DEADLINE]** Hi [FIRST NAME], Your SNAP (food assistance) benefits are set to end on **[END DATE]** unless you renew. Renewing usually takes about [XX] minutes, and we're here to help. **Your deadline: [DATE]** If we don't receive your renewal by then, your benefits may stop. If that happens, you'd need to apply again from the start. ### How to renew (pick one) - **Online:** [WEBSITE], the fastest option - **By phone:** Call [PHONE NUMBER], [HOURS] - **In person:** [OFFICE ADDRESS], [HOURS] - **By mail:** Return the enclosed form in the prepaid envelope ### Have these ready - Your case number: **[CASE NUMBER]** - Recent pay stubs or proof of income (last 30 days) - Any changes to your rent, utilities, or household members **Don't have everything?** Start anyway. You can send missing documents later, and we can help you figure out what you need. ### Need help? - Call us at [PHONE NUMBER]. We can walk you through it. - Free help is available in [LANGUAGES]. Call [NUMBER]. - If you need an accommodation for a disability, let us know. Renewing keeps your benefits coming without a gap. Please take a few minutes to do it today. [AGENCY NAME] [CONTACT INFO] --- ## Text Message Version (under 160 characters) **First reminder (30 days out):** > [Agency]: Your SNAP benefits end [DATE] unless you renew. It takes about 20 min. Renew at [SHORT LINK] or call [PHONE]. Reply STOP to opt out. **Final reminder (5–7 days out):** > [Agency]: Only [X] days left to renew SNAP. Don't lose your benefits. Renew now: [SHORT LINK] or call [PHONE]. Need help? We're here. --- ## Tips to Boost Response Rates Since many people put it off rather than refuse, these tend to help: 1. **Send several reminders** (e.g., 30, 14, and 5 days before the deadline). One notice is easy to miss. 2. **Put the deadline first.** Make it impossible to overlook. 3. **Use text messages.** They are often read far more than mail or email. 4. **Make it feel doable.** Mentioning how long it takes and that partial submissions are okay lowers the barrier. 5. **Make the link work on phones.** Many recipients only have mobile internet. 6. **Keep the tone helpful, not punitive.** People often delay because of confusion, work schedules, or paperwork stress, and a supportive tone gets better follow-through. If you tell me your agency name, deadline, and renewal options, I can tailor this further or adjust it for a specific reading level or language.
Practice Judge A Judge B Judge C Result
Deficit-based language Meets Flag Meets Meets (2 to 1)Split vote
Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Why judges flagged it
  • Deficit-based language, Judge B: “Since many people put it off rather than refuse, these tend to help:” Most of the reminder is respectful and barrier-aware, but this line repeats a procrastination framing instead of keeping the focus on barriers such as confusing paperwork, access, or work schedules.

Human-centered guidance

Sample 1 of 2 · 260 words
**Subject: Action needed: Renew your SNAP benefits by [deadline]** Your SNAP benefits will stop on **[end date]** unless you renew them. To keep your food benefits coming without a break, please send in your renewal by **[deadline]**. **How to renew** 1. **Get your renewal form.** Fill it out online at [website], or pick up a paper copy at [office address]. 2. **Gather your documents.** You may need: - Proof of income for the last 30 days, such as pay stubs - Your rent or mortgage amount - Recent utility bills - Any changes to who lives in your home 3. **Turn in your form and documents by [deadline].** You can submit online, by mail to [mailing address], or in person at [office address]. 4. **Complete your interview.** If you get a call or letter about an interview, please answer it or call us to set a time. **If you miss the deadline** Your benefits may stop. You can still reapply. Call us and we will help you get started. **Need help?** We can help you fill out the form, find your documents, or set up your interview. - Call: [phone number] - Hours: [days and times] - Visit: [office address] - Help is available in [languages]. **Renew by [deadline] to keep your benefits.** Questions? Call [phone number]. --- **Text message version (under 160 characters):** > Your SNAP benefits end [end date] unless you renew. Renew by [deadline] at [short link] or call [phone] for help. Fill in the bracketed details. Adjust the document list to match your state's renewal form.
Practice Judge A Judge B Judge C Result
Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Sample 2 of 2 · 174 words
**Subject: Action needed: Renew your SNAP benefits by [deadline]** Hello [Name], Your SNAP benefits will stop on [end date] unless you renew by **[deadline]**. There is still time, and we can help you finish. **How to renew** 1. **Fill out the renewal form.** You can do it online at [website], by mail, or in person at [office address]. 2. **Send your documents.** The form lists what we need, such as proof of income or rent. You can upload, mail, or drop them off. 3. **Do your interview, if you have one.** Check your letter for the date and time. If that time does not work, call us to change it. **We can help** - Call us at **[phone number]**, [days and hours]. - Visit us at [office address]. No appointment needed. - We can help you fill out the form, make copies, or find missing documents. **Already renewed?** Thank you. You do not need to do anything else. **Questions?** Call **[phone number]** before **[deadline]**. [Organization name] --- *Fill in the bracketed details before sending.*
Practice Judge A Judge B Judge C Result
Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)

Trauma-informed guidance

Sample 1 of 2 · 311 words
**Subject: Time to renew your SNAP benefits** Hello [First name], Your SNAP benefits are due for renewal. Please send your renewal form by **[due date]** so your benefits keep coming without a break. If we don't receive it by then, your benefits will stop on **[end date]**. You can still apply again after that, but there may be a gap in your benefits. **How to renew** 1. **Fill out the renewal form.** Choose the way that works best for you: - Online at [website] - By phone at [phone number] - In person at [office address], [days and hours] - By mail to [mailing address]. Mail it by [mail-by date] so it arrives in time. 2. **Send your documents.** You may need: - Proof of income from the last 30 days, like pay stubs - Your rent or mortgage amount - Utility bills - [Any other required documents] 3. **Complete your interview, if you're asked to.** Interviews can be by phone. If the time we give you doesn't work, call us to pick a new one. **We can help** - If you aren't sure which documents to send, call us. We'll go through the list with you. - If you're missing a document, send what you have by the due date. We'll work with you on the rest. - Help is available in [languages]. Free interpreters are available for any language. - If something has changed, like your address, phone number, income, or household, you can tell us when you renew. **Questions?** Call [phone number], [days and hours]. You can also text [text number] or email [email address]. Thank you, [Name] [Organization] [Phone number] | [Website] --- **Text message version (optional)** > [Organization]: Your SNAP renewal is due [due date]. Renew online at [link] or call [phone number]. We can help with the form and documents. Reply STOP to opt out.
Practice Judge A Judge B Judge C Result
Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Sample 2 of 2 · 286 words
**Subject: Your SNAP renewal is due by [date]** Hi [Name], It's time to renew your SNAP benefits, and we haven't received your renewal yet. To keep your benefits going without a break, please complete it by **[date]**. We can help with any part of this. Just call us at **[phone number]**. **How to renew** 1. **Get the renewal form.** You can fill it out online at [website], pick one up at [office address], or call us and we'll mail you one. 2. **Gather your documents.** These usually include: - Proof of income from the last 30 days (pay stubs or benefit letters) - Proof of housing costs (rent, mortgage, or utility bills) - Information about any changes in who lives with you Not sure what you need? Call us and we'll tell you. 3. **Send in your form and documents by [date].** You can submit online, by mail, or in person at [office address]. 4. **Complete your interview, if you have one.** The office will contact you to schedule it. Most interviews can be done by phone. **If you can't get everything together in time** Send in the form even if you're still gathering documents. Then call us, and we'll help you with the rest. **What happens after [date]** If your renewal isn't received by [date], your benefits will stop at the end of [month]. You can still apply again after that, but there may be a gap in benefits. **Questions or need help?** - Call: [phone number], [days and hours] - Visit: [office address], [days and hours] - Online: [website] Help is free and available in [languages]. [Organization name] --- Fill in the bracketed details, and check the document list against your state's current requirements.
Practice Judge A Judge B Judge C Result
Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Claude Sonnet 5.5Anthropic 0 of 2need revision0 of 2need revision0 of 2need revision
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Without guidance

Sample 1 of 2 · 431 words
# SNAP Recertification Reminder ## Text message version (SMS) > **[Agency Name] SNAP:** Your benefits end on **[date]** unless you renew. It takes about [10-15] minutes. Renew online at [link], call [phone], or visit [location]. Need help? We'll walk you through it. Reply HELP or call [phone]. **Shorter option:** > Your SNAP benefits are about to expire on **[date]**. Renew now at [link] or call [phone]. It's quick, and we can help. --- ## Letter / email version **Subject: Action needed: Renew your SNAP benefits by [date]** Dear [Name], Your SNAP (food assistance) benefits are set to end on **[date]**. To keep getting them without a gap, you need to complete your recertification by **[deadline]**. **It's quick, and you can do it any of these ways:** - **Online:** [website/portal link] - **By phone:** [phone number], [hours] - **In person:** [address], [hours] - **By mail or fax:** [address/fax number] **What to have ready:** - Photo ID - Proof of income for everyone in your household, such as recent pay stubs, benefit letters, or a note from your employer - Rent or mortgage and utility bills - Childcare or medical expenses, if you have them Don't have all of these? **Start anyway.** Submit what you have, and we'll tell you if anything else is needed. **What happens if you don't renew?** Your benefits will stop on [date]. If you renew late, there may be a delay before your benefits start again, so it's best to act now. **Already renewed?** Thank you! You can ignore this message. **Need help?** Call [phone] or visit [location]. We can help with the form, answer questions, or arrange an interview time that works for you. Language assistance and accommodations are available at no cost. Sincerely, [Agency Name] --- ## Tips for getting more people to respond - **Send more than one reminder.** Try 30 days, 14 days, and 3 days before the deadline, plus one after if there's a grace period. - **Put the deadline first.** Lead with the date and the one action you want. - **Cut barriers.** Link directly to the renewal page, not the homepage. Mention evening or weekend options if you have them. - **Reassure people.** Many don't renew because they think they no longer qualify or fear the process will be difficult. A line like "Many families still qualify, so please apply" can help. - **Use the right channel.** Text often gets the best response, with a mailed letter as backup. I can adjust the tone, reading level, or length, or add a Spanish version or a "final notice" version if you'd like.
Practice Judge A Judge B Judge C Result
Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Sample 2 of 2 · 428 words
# SNAP Recertification Reminder ## Letter / Email Version **Subject: Action needed: Renew your SNAP benefits by [DEADLINE DATE]** Hello [First Name], Your SNAP benefits are set to end on **[END DATE]** unless you renew them. We haven't received your recertification yet, and we don't want you to lose your food assistance. **Renewing takes about [10-15] minutes. Here's how:** - **Online:** [website link] - **By phone:** Call [phone number], [days/hours] - **In person:** [office address and hours] - **By mail or fax:** Send your completed form to [address/fax number] **What you'll need:** - Your case number: [number] - Proof of income (recent pay stubs, benefit letters) - Proof of rent/mortgage and utility costs - Any other documents listed on your renewal notice **Don't have all your documents? Submit the form anyway.** Sending it in on time keeps your case open while we work with you on the rest. **What happens if you don't renew?** Your benefits will stop on [END DATE]. If that happens, you may have to reapply and could face a gap in benefits. **Need help?** Call us at [phone number] or visit [office/website]. We can help you complete the form, and we can provide language assistance and accommodations at no cost. If you've already submitted your renewal, thank you. You don't need to do anything else. Sincerely, [Agency Name] --- ## Text Message Version > [Agency]: Your SNAP benefits end [DATE] unless you renew. It takes about 10 minutes. Renew now: [short link] or call [phone]. Missing documents? Submit anyway. Need help? Call us. **Shorter follow-up (3 days before deadline):** > [Agency]: Reminder: Your SNAP renewal is due in 3 days ([DATE]). Renew now: [short link] or call [phone]. --- ## Tips for Better Response - **Send multiple reminders**, such as 30, 14, 7, and 3 days before the deadline, through more than one channel (text, mail, phone). - **Put the deadline first.** Make it the most prominent item in the message. - **Offer one-click or one-call options.** The fewer steps, the more people finish. - **Say that partial submissions are OK.** Many people put it off because they think they need every document. - **Add a "Call me" option** for people who struggle with online forms. - **Send a final notice after the deadline** if your state has a grace period. Many states let people finish within 30 days without a full reapplication. If you tell me your state, delivery channel, and reading level or language needs, I can tailor this with the right terminology, such as "recertification" vs. "renewal," and any grace-period rules.
Practice Judge A Judge B Judge C Result
Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)

Human-centered guidance

Sample 1 of 2 · 245 words
**Subject: Renew your SNAP benefits by [deadline date]** Hello [First name], Your SNAP benefits will end on [date] unless you recertify by [deadline date]. Recertifying takes about [time estimate] and keeps your benefits going. **How to recertify** 1. Gather your documents: [list, e.g., photo ID, proof of income, proof of rent or housing costs]. 2. Choose how to send them: - Online: [website link] - By phone: [phone number], [days and hours] - In person: [address], [days and hours] - By mail: [mailing address] 3. Complete the recertification form and send your documents by [deadline date]. 4. Watch for a letter or text confirming your renewal. **Need help?** We can help you fill out the form, find your documents, or get to an appointment. Call us at [phone number] or stop by [address]. If you need an interpreter or an accessible format, tell us and we will arrange it. **Already recertified?** Thank you. You don't need to do anything else. If you aren't sure, call [phone number] and we will check for you. If you are having trouble meeting the deadline, call us before it passes. We can help you figure out your options. [Organization name] [Phone] | [Email] | [Website] --- **Short text version:** Your SNAP benefits end [date] unless you recertify by [deadline]. Do it online at [link] or call [phone] for help. Already done? Thank you. Fill in the bracketed details with your local agency's exact deadline and submission options before sending.
Practice Judge A Judge B Judge C Result
Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Sample 2 of 2 · 194 words
**Subject: Your SNAP renewal is due [deadline date]** Hello [First name], Your SNAP benefits will stop on [end date] unless you renew. Please send in your renewal by [deadline date] so your benefits continue without a break. **How to renew** 1. Gather your documents. You will usually need: - Photo ID - Recent pay stubs or other proof of income - Rent and utility bills - [Any other documents your agency requires] 2. Complete the renewal form [online at (website) / by mail / in person at (address)]. 3. Submit the form and your documents by [deadline date]. 4. Watch for a letter or call from [agency name]. You may be asked for an interview. **Need help?** We can walk you through the form by phone or in person. - Call: [phone number], [days and hours] - Visit: [address] - Email: [email address] If you have already renewed, thank you. You can ignore this message. If the deadline has passed, call us right away and we will help you find out what to do next. [Organization name] --- Bracketed items need your details: dates, contact information, and the document list your state agency requires.
Practice Judge A Judge B Judge C Result
Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)

Trauma-informed guidance

Sample 1 of 2 · 253 words
**Subject: Your SNAP recertification is due by [DATE]** Hello [First name], Your SNAP recertification is due by **[DATE]**. We haven't received it yet. If it doesn't come in by then, your benefits will stop at the end of [MONTH]. You can finish it in about [XX] minutes. **How to recertify** 1. Gather your documents: [list, e.g., photo ID, recent pay stubs or proof of income, rent or utility bill]. 2. Choose how to send them: - Online: [link] - By phone: [phone number], [days and hours] - In person: [address], [days and hours] - By mail or fax: [address or number] 3. Tell us about any changes in your household, income, or expenses. **Need help or more time?** Recertification paperwork is a lot to fit into a busy month. If you are missing a document, can't get to an office, or have questions, call us at [phone number]. We can walk through it with you by phone, and we can help you find other ways to send documents. If you can't finish by [DATE], call us before then and we will go over your options. If your benefits do stop, you can still reapply. Calling us first keeps things simpler. **Contact us** Phone: [phone number], [days and hours] Address: [address] Website: [link] Thank you, [Name] [Organization] *Note: I left placeholders for the deadline, contact details, and document list, since I don't have those. I also kept the "didn't get around to it" idea out of the message so it doesn't read as blame.*
Practice Judge A Judge B Judge C Result
Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Sample 2 of 2 · 268 words
**Subject: Your SNAP renewal is due [DATE]** Hello [First name], Your SNAP benefits need to be renewed by **[DATE]**. If we don't receive your renewal by then, your benefits will stop after [DATE]. Renewing takes about [X minutes]. **How to renew** 1. Gather your ID and your most recent proof of income. If you have rent or utility bills, have those ready too. 2. Choose how you want to renew: - Online: [link] - By phone: [phone number], [hours] - In person: [address and hours] - By mail: [mailing address] 3. Tell us if anything has changed, such as your income, who lives with you, or your address. **Need help?** We can go through the form with you, by phone or in person. We can also help if you don't have all your documents yet. Call [phone number] or email [email]. You can also stop by [address] during [hours]. **Already renewed?** Thank you. You don't need to do anything else. If you're not sure, call us at [phone number] and we'll check. **If you miss the date** Call us as soon as you can. [Insert what the agency allows, such as a grace period or a way to reapply.] To renew or get help: [phone number] | [email] | [link] [Organization name] --- **Short text version** "Hi [First name], your SNAP renewal is due [DATE]. Renew online at [link] or call [phone number] for help. It takes about [X minutes]. Already renewed? Thank you, nothing more to do." Fill in the bracketed details from your agency's notice, especially the grace-period language, so the dates and options are accurate.
Practice Judge A Judge B Judge C Result
Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
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Without guidance

Sample 1 of 2 · 236 words
**Subject: Reminder — your SNAP recertification is due [Date]** Hi [Name], Our records show that you haven’t completed your SNAP recertification yet. We know life gets busy, so this is a friendly reminder to take care of it now—before the deadline. **Your recertification deadline is [Date].** If you don’t complete your recertification by then, your SNAP benefits may stop. **You can recertify in any of these ways:** - Online: [Website] - By phone: [Phone number] - In person: [Office address] - By mail: [Mailing address] **Have this information ready, if possible:** - Proof of income - Household expenses, such as rent and utilities - Information about everyone in your household - Any other documents listed on your recertification form If you need help completing your recertification, call [Phone number]. Free assistance is available, and we can help you step by step. **If you already submitted your recertification, please ignore this reminder.** If you missed your deadline, contact us right away—you may still be able to recertify. Please don’t wait until the last minute. Complete your recertification today. Thank you, [Agency Name] [Phone number] | [Website] --- **Short text/voicemail version:** Hi [Name], this is [Agency] with a reminder that your SNAP recertification is due [Date]. If you don’t complete it by then, your benefits may stop. You can recertify online at [Website] or call [Phone] for help. If you already submitted it, thank you—please ignore this message.
Practice Judge A Judge B Judge C Result
Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Sample 2 of 2 · 553 words
Here are a few options for reminder messages, ranging from a text message to a formal letter. The key is to be warm, non-judgmental, and clear about the consequences while emphasizing that help is available. ### Option 1: Short & Direct (Best for SMS Text Message) **Subject/Opening:** Important: Your SNAP benefits are waiting for you! Hi [Name], We noticed you haven't completed your SNAP recertification yet. We know life gets busy, but we don't want you to miss out on your benefits! You must recertify by **[Date]** to keep your food assistance. It only takes a few minutes. **3 Ways to Finish:** 1. **Online:** [Website Link] 2. **Call:** [Phone Number] 3. **In Person:** [Address] Need help? We are here for you. Call us at [Phone Number]. --- ### Option 2: The "We Understand" Script (Best for Phone Calls) **Opening:** "Hi, this is [Your Name] from [Agency Name]. I’m calling to remind you that your SNAP benefits are up for renewal. We know things get busy, and we wanted to make sure you don't have a gap in your benefits." **The "Hook":** "We just need to update your information by **[Date]** . If we don't hear from you by then, your case will close, and you'll have to start the application process all over again." **The Solution:** "Can we help you get this done right now over the phone? Or would you prefer we send you a link to do it online?" **If they say they are busy:** "I totally understand. What is the best time to call you back so we can get this sorted out quickly?" --- ### Option 3: The Formal Letter/Email (Best for Mail or Email) **Subject: Action Required: Renew Your SNAP Benefits by [Date]** Dear [Name], We are writing to remind you that it is time to renew your SNAP (Food Stamps) benefits. **We have not yet received your recertification form.** We understand that paperwork can pile up, but your benefits are scheduled to end on **[Date]** . To ensure you and your family continue to receive the support you need, please complete your recertification before this date. **What you need to do:** Please submit your recertification by **[Date]** using one of the following methods: - **Online:** Visit [Website] and log into your account. - **By Phone:** Call [Phone Number] to complete an interview. - **By Mail:** Return the form sent to you in the enclosed envelope. - **In Person:** Visit our office at [Address]. **Why it's important:** If you do not recertify, your case will close. You will lose your benefits and will have to re-apply from scratch. **Need Help?** If you are having trouble with the form or have questions, please call us at **[Phone Number]** . We are happy to walk you through it. Sincerely, [Your Agency Name] --- ### Option 4: The "Quick Checklist" (Best for Flyers or Social Media Posts) **Don't let your SNAP benefits expire!** **Got 5 minutes?** That’s all it takes to keep your benefits active. ✅ **Check the Date:** Your recertification is due by **[Date]** . ✅ **Gather Info:** Have your ID and proof of income ready. ✅ **Submit:** Go to [Website] or call [Phone Number]. **Don't wait until the last minute!** If you miss the deadline, your benefits will stop. Call us today if you need help getting it done.
Practice Judge A Judge B Judge C Result
Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)

Human-centered guidance

Sample 1 of 2 · 201 words
**Subject line: Your SNAP recertification is due [DATE]** Hi [First name], We're writing to remind you to recertify your SNAP benefits. Recertification is a check-in. It's how we confirm you still qualify. Doing it on time keeps your benefits coming without a break. **Your recertification is due by [DATE].** If we don't receive it by then, your SNAP benefits will stop on [DATE]. **Three ways to recertify** 1. **Online:** [website] 2. **By phone:** [phone number], [hours] 3. **In person:** [address], [hours] **What you'll need** - Proof of your current income (pay stubs, a letter from your employer, or a benefit letter) - Your rent or mortgage amount - Names and birthdates for everyone in your household **Already sent it in?** Thank you — you can ignore this reminder. **Need help?** Call us at [phone number]. If you're missing a document, you've moved, or you're not sure what we need, we can walk through it with you. If the due date has already passed, call us and ask what your options are. You can also reach [partner organization] at [phone number] for free help filling out the form. [Organization name] [Phone] | [Website] --- *Bracketed items need your local details before sending.*
Practice Judge A Judge B Judge C Result
Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Sample 2 of 2 · 199 words
**Subject: Your SNAP recertification is due — please act by [date]** Hi [Name], We have not received your SNAP recertification yet. Your benefits will end on [date] unless we get it. **Three ways to recertify** 1. **Online:** [link]. Fastest option. You can upload documents at the end. 2. **By phone:** [number], [days and hours]. A worker can take your answers over the phone. 3. **In person or by mail:** [address]. Drop box is open [hours]. **What we need** - Proof of income for the last 30 days ([examples: pay stubs, benefit letter]) - [ID / proof of address, if required in your state] - [Other documents] **If something is getting in the way** Call us at [number]. If you are missing a document, did not get the form, or moved recently, we can help. We can mail a new form, take your information by phone, or tell you whether you qualify for more time. You do not have to sort it out alone. **If you already sent it** Thank you — you can ignore this message. If you want to confirm we received it, call [number]. Questions? Call [number] or email [address]. [Language line info, if available.] [Organization name]
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Trauma-informed guidance

Sample 1 of 2 · 274 words
**Subject: Your SNAP benefits need renewing — please reply by [date]** We're writing because your SNAP benefits are due to renew, and we haven't received your renewal yet. **Your benefits are scheduled to end on [date].** To keep them, we need your renewal by [date]. **Three ways to renew** 1. **Online.** Go to [website] and sign in. The form takes about 15 minutes. 2. **By phone.** Call [number], [days and hours]. Someone can fill out the form with you over the phone. 3. **In person.** Come to [address], [days and hours]. No appointment needed. **What you'll need** - Proof of income for [month range] — pay stubs, a letter from an employer, or a benefit letter - Your rent or housing cost - [Any other document] If you can't find one of these, call us before the deadline. We can usually help you find another way to show it. **If we don't hear from you by [date]** Your benefits will stop on [date]. You can reapply after that, but there may be a gap before they start again. **If you need help** Call [number] and ask for [name or "the SNAP team"]. We can help if the form is confusing, if you need an interpreter, or if you need more time. You don't have to explain why. You can also call [number] to check whether we received your renewal. [Organization name] [Phone] · [Website] · [Address] [Hours] --- *Bracketed items need your local details. The copy states the deadline and the consequence as facts rather than warnings, and offers phone and in-person options so the reader has a real choice about how to respond.*
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Sample 2 of 2 · 235 words
**Subject:** Your SNAP benefits: we need your recertification by [date] We have not received your recertification yet. To keep your SNAP benefits without a break, we need it by **[date]**. If you already sent it, thank you. You can ignore this reminder. The form takes some time to complete, and the deadline can arrive quickly. Here is what to do. **Three ways to recertify** 1. **Online:** [website] 2. **By phone:** [phone number]. A caseworker can fill in the form with you over the phone. 3. **In person:** [address], open [days and hours]. **What to have ready** - Photo ID - Proof of income for [time period], such as pay stubs - Your rent or mortgage amount - Your utility costs **If you need more time** Call [phone number] before [date]. We can talk through your options. **If we do not receive your recertification by [date]** Your benefits will stop on [date]. You can reapply after that, but there may be a gap before they start again. **Free help** [Community partner name] can help you complete the form at no cost. Call [phone number]. Questions? Call [phone number], [days and hours]. Free interpretation is available. --- *Placeholders in brackets need your local details. If your agency can accept a verbal recertification or offers a grace period, add that to the "need more time" section — it is the part readers most often do not know exists.*
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Sample 1 of 2 · 484 words
Because people who miss recertification deadlines usually do so due to busy lives, stress, or dreading the paperwork, the most effective reminders **reduce friction**, **highlight the specific deadline**, and **remind them of what they stand to lose** (loss aversion). Here are a few options depending on the communication channel: --- ### Option 1: Text Message / SMS (Highest response rate) > **Action Required:** Don’t lose your SNAP grocery benefits. Your renewal is due by **[Date]**. It takes about 15 minutes to complete online. > > Keep your card active here: **[Link]** > > Need help? Call [Phone Number]. --- ### Option 2: Email **Subject Line:** Urgent: Keep your SNAP benefits active past [Date] *(Alternative Subject: Don’t lose your grocery benefits—15-minute renewal due [Date])* **Body:** Hi [First Name], This is a quick reminder that your SNAP benefits are scheduled to end on **[Date]** unless you complete your recertification. We know you're busy, so we’ve made the process as fast as possible. Most people finish in under 15 minutes. **[BUTTON: Renew My Benefits Now]** **What happens if you don’t renew?** Your EBT card will stop receiving monthly funds after **[Date]**, and you would have to start a brand-new application from the beginning to get them back. **How to renew today:** 1. Click the button above to log in to **[Portal Name]**. 2. Confirm your current income and household info. 3. Snap a photo of any required documents (like a recent paystub) on your phone. *Prefer to do it another way? You can also renew by phone at [Phone Number] or return the packet mailed to your address.* --- ### Option 3: Postcard / Letter Insert (High Visibility) **[FRONT / TOP - BOLD BANNER]** **FINAL NOTICE: Don’t let your food benefits expire on [Date].** Dear [First Name], Your monthly SNAP benefits will automatically stop on **[Date]** because we haven't received your recertification form yet. **You can still keep your benefits without interruption, but you must act now.** **3 FAST WAYS TO KEEP YOUR BENEFITS:** 1. **Fastest: On Your Phone / Computer** Go to **[Website]** or scan the QR code below. (Takes ~15 minutes) *[INSERT QR CODE]* 2. **By Phone** Call **[Phone Number]**, Mon–Fri from [Hours]. 3. **By Mail / In Person** Fill out the form mailed to you on [Date mailed] and drop it off at [Local Office Address]. *If your household situation hasn't changed, renewal is even faster.* --- ### Key Behavioral Tips to Increase Follow-Through: * **Emphasize the time estimate:** Phrases like *"Takes 15 minutes"* dramatically reduce the mental barrier to starting. * **Focus on keeping, not getting:** People are twice as motivated to *not lose* money they already have than to apply for something new. (e.g., *"Keep your card active"* works better than *"Apply for renewal"*). * **Send at the right time:** For SMS, late afternoons (3:00 PM – 6:00 PM) or weekend mornings often perform best for working individuals. Avoid early Monday mornings.
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Sample 2 of 2 · 496 words
When people “just don’t get around to” recertifying, it’s usually because the process feels long, confusing, or easy to put off until tomorrow. To overcome this, reminders must use **loss aversion** (reminding them of the money they will lose), **low-friction language** (emphasizing how fast/easy it is), and a **clear, urgent deadline**. Here are a few options tailored for different channels (Text, Email, and Mail): --- ### Option 1: Text Message (SMS) *Text messages have the highest response rate for administrative "nudges." Keep it under 160 characters if possible, or use a two-part text.* > **Urgent:** Don’t lose your grocery benefits! Your SNAP renewal is due by **[Date]**. It only takes about 15 minutes on your phone. Tap here to finish now: **[Link]** > > *Need help? Call [Phone Number].* --- ### Option 2: Email *Use clear formatting, bold text for scannability, and a prominent button/link.* **Subject:** Action Required: Keep your SNAP grocery benefits active *(Alternative Subject: Don't lose your food benefits—15-minute renewal due [Date])* **Hi [First Name],** Life gets busy, but we don't want you to lose your grocery benefits! Your SNAP benefits are scheduled to end on **[Date]** because we haven't received your recertification yet. The good news? **You can finish your renewal online in about 15 minutes.** 👉 **[Click here to renew your SNAP benefits now]** *(Link)* **What you might need handy:** * Proof of recent income (like your latest paystub) * Updated housing or utility costs (if they changed) **Prefer not to do it online?** * **By Phone:** Call us at **[Phone Number]** (Mon–Fri, [Hours]) * **In Person / By Mail:** Drop off your forms at **[Office Address]** Please don’t wait—once your benefits stop, you have to submit a brand new application, which takes much longer. Thank you, **[Agency/Department Name]** --- ### Option 3: Postcard / Letter Insert *Visually bold with large typography for the deadline.* > ### ⚠️ Don't lose your grocery money. > > **Your SNAP benefits will stop on [Date] unless you renew.** > > We know paperwork is a hassle, but renewing is much faster than reapplying from scratch. > > **Renew in 3 easy steps:** > 1. **Go to:** [Website URL] *(or scan the QR code below)* > 2. **Log in:** Use your case number: **[Case #]** > 3. **Submit:** Confirm your details and upload any needed paystubs. > > *Takes about 15 minutes.* > > **[ Large QR Code Here ]** > > Questions? Call us at **[Phone Number]** before **[Date]**. --- ### Key Behavioral Tips for these Reminders: 1. **Highlight the time commitment:** Saying *"Takes about 15 minutes"* immediately lowers the mental barrier to starting. 2. **Warn them about the alternative:** Mentioning that *letting benefits lapse means starting a whole new application* motivates people to do the shorter recertification now. 3. **Send a final "48-hour" warning:** Send a text 2 days before the final cut-off date: *“Final Notice: Your SNAP benefits will end in 48 hours. Submit your renewal today to keep receiving food assistance: [Link]”*
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Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Why judges flagged it
  • Deficit-based language, Judge B: “When people “just don’t get around to” recertifying, it’s usually because the process feels long, confusing, or easy to put off until tomorrow.” The response repeats the prompt’s careless/procrastination framing and adds that renewal is “easy to put off,” rather than fully assuming clients are busy or facing barriers.
  • Deficit-based language, Judge C: “When people “just don’t get around to” recertifying, it’s usually because the process feels long, confusing, or easy to put off until tomorrow.” Reproduces the prompt's carelessness framing and retains individual blame for delay rather than assuming a busy reader and systemic cause.

Human-centered guidance

Sample 1 of 2 · 164 words
**Subject:** Reminder: Renew your SNAP benefits by [Date] This is a reminder to submit your SNAP recertification form by [Date] so your grocery benefits continue without interruption. Here is what you need to do: 1. **Submit your form:** Complete your renewal online at [Website] or return the paper form mailed to your address. 2. **Send your documents:** Provide proof of any recent changes in income, address, or household expenses. You can upload these online or drop them off at [Office Address]. 3. **Complete your interview (if required):** If your notice says an interview is needed, check the letter for your scheduled date or call [Phone Number] to set one up. If you have already submitted your renewal, you can check your status at [Website] or call [Phone Number]. **Questions or need help with your application?** Call us at [Phone Number] or visit our office at [Office Address], Monday through Friday, [Hours]. We can help you complete the paperwork or answer questions about your case.
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Sample 2 of 2 · 161 words
**Subject:** Action required: Renew your SNAP benefits by [Date] Your SNAP food benefits will end on [Date] unless you complete your recertification. To keep receiving your benefits without interruption, please complete these steps as soon as possible: 1. **Submit your renewal form** * **Online:** Log in to your account at [Website URL]. * **By mail:** Fill out the paper form sent to your address and mail it to [Mailing Address]. * **In person:** Drop off your form at your local office at [Office Address]. 2. **Provide your documents** Include any required proof of income, expenses, or address changes listed on your renewal form. 3. **Complete your interview (if required)** If an interview is scheduled, you will receive a notice with the date and time. Most interviews happen by phone. **Need help with your renewal?** * **Call us:** [Phone Number], Monday through Friday, [Hours]. * **Visit in person:** [Office Address], [Hours]. * Language assistance and disability accommodations are available at no cost.
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Trauma-informed guidance

Sample 1 of 2 · 193 words
**Subject:** Action needed to renew your SNAP benefits It is time to renew your SNAP benefits. To keep receiving your food assistance without a gap, please submit your renewal paperwork by **[Date]**. Here is how to complete your renewal: 1. **Submit your renewal form.** * **Online:** Log into your account at **[Website]**. * **By mail:** Fill out the paper form sent to your address and mail it in the prepaid envelope provided. * **In person:** Drop off your form at your local office at **[Address]**. 2. **Send in any requested documents.** * You may need to provide proof of current income, housing costs, or child care expenses. A full list of needed documents is in your account at **[Website]** or listed on page **[X]** of your packet. 3. **Complete your interview (if required).** * If an interview is scheduled for you, the notice with the date and time is in your packet. If you need to reschedule, call **[Phone Number]**. **Need help?** If you have questions, need help filling out the forms, or need a replacement packet, our team is here to help: * **Call:** [Phone Number] (Monday–Friday, [Hours]) * **Visit:** [Office Address]
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Sample 2 of 2 · 190 words
**Subject:** Important: Submit your SNAP renewal by [Date] to keep your food benefits This is a reminder to complete your SNAP recertification by **[Date]** so your benefits continue without a gap. To keep your benefits active, please complete these steps: 1. **Submit your renewal form.** * **Online:** Log into your account at [Website URL]. * **By mail:** Fill out the paper form sent to you and mail it to [Mailing Address]. * **In person:** Drop off your form at [Office Address]. 2. **Send your documents.** Provide copies of any requested paperwork, such as recent pay stubs or proof of address. You can upload these online or submit copies with your form. 3. **Complete your interview (if required).** If your notice says an interview is needed, check the date and time listed or call [Phone Number] to schedule it. If you have already submitted your form, you do not need to submit it again. **Need help or have questions?** Call [Office / Support Line] at **[Phone Number]**, Monday through Friday from [Hours], or visit [Office Address]. Staff are available to help you complete the forms or answer questions about your case.
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Without guidance

Sample 1 of 2 · 584 words
Since the main issue is people simply putting it off or forgetting, the key is to make the message **low-stress, urgent, and easy to act on.** If it feels like too much paperwork, they will keep procrastinating. Here are a few options depending on how you are reaching out to them: ### Option 1: SMS / Text Message (Best for quick action) *Texts have the highest open rate. Keep it short and put the link front and center.* > **Friendly reminder:** It’s time to renew your SNAP benefits! Don’t let your grocery money pause Next Month. It only takes about 15 minutes on your phone. Tap here to knock it out right now: [Link] Questions? Call [Phone Number]. ### Option 2: Email (Friendly & Empathetic) *Good for addressing the "I'm too busy" mindset.* **Subject:** Keep your SNAP benefits coming! (Takes 15 mins) 🛒 **Alternative Subject:** [Name], quick reminder about your grocery benefits Hi [First Name], Life gets busy, and nobody likes doing paperwork. We get it! However, your SNAP benefits are set to pause on **[Date]** because we haven’t received your renewal form yet. We want to make sure you don't lose the money you rely on for groceries. The good news? Renewing is faster than a trip to the grocery store. **Here is how to get it off your to-do list today:** 1. **Go online:** Click here [Link] (You can do this right from your phone). 2. **Update your info:** Let us know if your income or household has changed. (If nothing has changed, this part is super fast!) 3. **Hit submit.** Need a hand or have a quick question? Call us at [Phone Number]—we can even help you do it over the phone. Please submit your renewal by **[Deadline Date]** so your benefits keep coming without a break! Best, [Organization/Agency Name] ### Option 3: Postcard / Mailer (Visual & Direct) *If sending physical mail, use a postcard rather than a letter in an envelope (people avoid opening "official" looking envelopes).* **Headline:** Don’t leave your grocery money on the table! 🍎🥦 Hi [Name], You are scheduled to lose your SNAP benefits on **[Date]**, just because it’s time for your regular renewal. **Don't wait until your card stops working at the register!** Take 15 minutes today to keep your benefits rolling. * **Fastest way:** Scan this QR code with your phone camera to renew right now: **[Insert QR Code]** * **Online:** Visit **[Short Website URL]** * **By Phone:** Call **[Phone Number]** (Monday–Friday, [Hours]) *Tip: Have your paystubs from the last 30 days handy (if your income has changed).* **Your Deadline: [Date]** ### Option 4: The "Last Chance" Nudge (High Urgency) *Send this 3–5 days before their deadline.* > **URGENT:** [Name], your SNAP benefits will stop in [Number] days if you don't renew. Don't lose next month's grocery budget! It’s not too late. Click here to finish your renewal in 10 minutes: [Link] or call [Number] right away for help. ### 💡 3 Behavioral Tips to Increase Responses: 1. **Give a time estimate:** Telling people "it takes 15 minutes" removes the mental block that it’s going to take all afternoon. 2. **Mention "No Changes":** Many people don't recertify because nothing in their life has changed, so they think they don't need to. Explicitly state: *"Even if nothing has changed, you still need to check in."* 3. **Use the word "Pause" instead of "Cancel":** Saying benefits will be "terminated" or "canceled" causes anxiety, which leads to avoidance. Saying they will "pause" or "stop" feels more manageable.
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Deficit-based language Meets Flag Flag Needs revision (2 to 1)Split vote
Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Why judges flagged it
  • Deficit-based language, Judge B: “they will keep procrastinating.” The response repeats the prompt’s deficit framing by characterizing recipients as procrastinating, putting things off, or having an avoidance mindset rather than simply being busy or facing barriers.
  • Deficit-based language, Judge C: “Since the main issue is people simply putting it off or forgetting, the key is to make the message **low-stress, urgent, and easy to act on.**” Reproduces the prompt's 'don't get around to it' framing as putting off, forgetting, and procrastinating, blaming the reader as careless rather than busy.
Sample 2 of 2 · 640 words
Since the main barrier here is procrastination and feeling overwhelmed by bureaucracy, the best approach is to make the process sound **fast, easy, and urgent**, without sounding scary or judgmental. Here are a few options across different channels, designed to get people who "just haven't gotten around to it" to take action today. ### Option 1: Text Message (SMS) – *Best for immediate action* *Texts have the highest open rates. Keep it short, friendly, and give them a direct link.* **Draft 1 (Focus on speed):** Hi [First Name]! Life gets busy, so here’s a quick reminder: Your SNAP benefits need to be renewed by [Date] so they don’t pause. Good news—it only takes about 10 minutes online! Tap here to knock it out right now: [Link] **Draft 2 (Focus on keeping money):** Don't leave your grocery money on the table, [First Name]! Your SNAP recertification is due on [Date]. Check it off your to-do list today in just a few clicks: [Link]. Need help? Call us at [Phone Number]. --- ### Option 2: Email – *Best for giving easy, step-by-step instructions* **Subject Line Ideas:** * Don't lose your grocery benefits! Renew SNAP in 10 minutes ⏱️ * Quick reminder: Your SNAP benefits expire on [Date] * Check this off your to-do list today (SNAP Renewal) **Body:** Hi [First Name], We know life gets hectic and paperwork is the last thing you want to deal with. We noticed you haven’t renewed your SNAP benefits yet, and we don’t want your grocery money to get cut off! To keep your benefits coming without a pause, you just need to recertify by **[Date]**. The good news? You don’t have to do it by mail. You can knock this out on your phone or computer in about **15 minutes**. **Here is how to get it done today:** 1. **Click here to log in:** [Insert Link] 2. **Update your info:** Let us know if your income or household has changed (if nothing has changed, this part is super fast!). 3. **Hit submit!** **[ BUTTON: Renew My SNAP Now ]** **Stuck or don't have time to go online?** Just call us at **[Phone Number]** between [Hours]. You can do the whole thing over the phone while you fold laundry or make dinner. Don't leave your benefits on the table—take a few minutes to check this off your list today! Best, [Organization/Agency Name] --- ### Option 3: Postcard / Mailer – *Best for sitting on the kitchen counter* *If you are sending physical mail, do not send a formal letter inside an envelope (people avoid opening "scary" mail). Send a bright postcard.* **Front of Postcard:** **Keep your grocery money coming! 🛒** *(It takes less time than waiting in the checkout line).* **Back of Postcard:** Hi [First Name], We know your to-do list is long, so we made renewing your SNAP benefits faster than ever. Your benefits will pause on **[Date]** unless you recertify. Don't let a missed deadline cost you your grocery budget! **Do it right now from your phone:** 👉 Point your phone camera at this QR code: **[Insert QR Code]** 👉 Or go to **[Short Website URL]** No computer? No problem. Call **[Phone Number]** and we will help you do it over the phone in just a few minutes. ### Why these work for procrastinators: * **"Life gets busy":** It validates them. It says, "You aren't in trouble, we know you're just busy." * **Time-anchoring ("Takes 10 minutes"):** People put things off because they think it will take two hours. Telling them it takes 10-15 minutes lowers the mental barrier to starting. * **"Grocery money" instead of "Benefits":** Using the word "grocery money" makes the loss feel more real and immediate than bureaucratic words like "assistance" or "benefits." * **"Check it off your list":** Appeals to the psychological satisfaction of getting a nagging task done.
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Deficit-based language Meets Flag Flag Needs revision (2 to 1)Split vote
Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Why judges flagged it
  • Deficit-based language, Judge B: “Since the main barrier here is procrastination and feeling overwhelmed by bureaucracy” The response frames recipients' delay as procrastination and later labels them as “procrastinators,” which reproduces a deficit-based explanation instead of assuming people are busy or facing barriers.
  • Deficit-based language, Judge C: “Why these work for procrastinators:” Labels recipients with the identity category procrastinators and repeats just haven't gotten around to it framing, blaming a personal trait instead of separating circumstance and naming systemic context.

Human-centered guidance

Sample 1 of 2 · 197 words
**Subject: Action Needed: Renew your SNAP benefits before they expire** Your SNAP benefits are up for renewal soon. To keep receiving your monthly food benefits without a break, please complete and submit your recertification form by [Date]. Renewing takes a few steps, and we are here to help you through the process. **How to renew your benefits:** 1. **Online:** Log in to your account at [Website Link] and fill out the renewal form. 2. **By Mail:** Complete the paper form mailed to you and send it back in the prepaid envelope. 3. **In Person or by Phone:** Call us at [Phone Number] or visit [Location] during [Hours]. We can help you fill out the paperwork and submit your documents. **What you will need:** * Proof of your current income (such as recent pay stubs or a benefit letter) * Information about your monthly housing and utility costs, if they have changed If you have already sent in your renewal form, thank you. You do not need to do anything else right now. If you have questions, lost your form, or need extra help gathering your documents, please call us at [Phone Number] or reply to this message.
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Sample 2 of 2 · 200 words
**Action Needed: Renew your SNAP benefits by [Date] to keep your food assistance.** It is time to complete your SNAP recertification. If we do not receive your renewal form by **[Date]**, your benefits will stop on **[Date]**. We know the renewal paperwork takes time, and our team is here to help you get it done. **How to renew:** 1. **Online:** Log in to your account at **[Website]**. 2. **By mail or drop-off:** Fill out your renewal form and return it to **[Address]**. 3. **By phone or in person:** Call us at **[Phone Number]** to complete the form over the phone or to set up a time to meet with a staff member. **What you will need:** * Proof of your current income (such as recent pay stubs or a benefits letter). * Information about any changes to your household or housing costs. If you are missing a document, please submit your signed form anyway so you do not miss the deadline. We can help you gather the rest of the paperwork afterward. **Questions or need a hand?** Call or text us at **[Phone Number]** or visit **[Location]** between **[Hours]**. We can walk through the form with you step by step.
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Trauma-informed guidance

Sample 1 of 2 · 201 words
**Subject: Action needed: Renew your SNAP benefits by [Date]** Your SNAP benefits are up for renewal soon. To keep receiving your monthly food benefits without a break, please complete your recertification by **[Date]**. We know the renewal paperwork takes time, and our team is here to help you get it done. **How to renew:** 1. **Online:** Log in to your account at **[Website Link]** and submit your renewal form. 2. **By phone:** Call us at **[Phone Number]** to complete the form over the phone with a staff member. 3. **In person:** Visit our office at **[Address]** between **[Hours]**. No appointment is needed. **What you may need to share:** * Proof of your current income (such as a recent pay stub or benefits letter), if it has changed. * Proof of housing costs (such as a rent receipt or utility bill), if you have moved. If you do not have all of your documents right now, **submit the renewal form anyway** by **[Date]** to hold your place. You can send the remaining documents later. **Questions or need a hand?** Call or text us at **[Phone Number]** or reply to this message. We can walk through the form with you step by step.
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Sample 2 of 2 · 203 words
**Subject: Action needed: Renew your SNAP benefits by [Date]** Your SNAP benefits are up for renewal. To keep your benefits active without a break, please submit your recertification form by **[Date]**. We know the renewal process takes time and paperwork, and we are here to help you get it done. **How to renew** Choose the option that works best for you: 1. **Online:** Log in to your account at **[Website Link]** and complete the renewal form. 2. **By phone:** Call us at **[Phone Number]** (Monday–Friday, **[Hours]**). We can walk through the form with you over the phone. 3. **In person:** Visit our office at **[Address]** during **[Hours]**. 4. **By mail:** Fill out the paper form sent to your address and mail it back using the enclosed envelope. **What you may need** Have these ready only if your information has changed in the past six months: * Proof of current income (such as a recent pay stub or benefits letter) * Current housing and utility costs **Need a hand?** If you have questions, are missing a document, or want help filling out the form, please reach out before **[Date]**. * **Call or text:** **[Phone Number]** * **Email:** **[Email Address]** * **In person:** **[Address]**, **[Hours]**
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Without guidance

Sample 1 of 2 · 492 words
Depending on where you are sending this (text, email, or a physical letter), you will need a different tone. Since many people miss this deadline due to "life getting in the way," the best approach is to be **urgent but supportive**, emphasizing that it only takes a few minutes to avoid a loss of benefits. Here are three options: ### Option 1: The "Quick & Urgent" Text Message *Best for high open rates and people who are procrastinating.* **Text:** ⚠️ IMPORTANT: Your SNAP benefits are at risk! You haven't completed your recertification yet. Please do it today to avoid a gap in your food assistance. Apply here: [Link] or call [Phone Number]. --- ### Option 2: The "Helpful Reminder" Email *Best for providing clear instructions and reducing anxiety about the process.* **Subject:** Action Required: Don’t lose your SNAP benefits! **Dear [Name],** We noticed that you haven't completed your SNAP recertification yet. We want to make sure you continue receiving your benefits without any interruptions. **If you don't recertify by [Date], your benefits will stop.** The good news is that it only takes a few minutes to complete. You can do it in three ways: 1. **Online (Fastest):** Log into your portal at [Link]. 2. **By Phone:** Call us at [Phone Number]. 3. **In Person:** Visit your local office at [Address]. If you have already submitted your paperwork, please disregard this message. If you need help with the process, please reach out to us immediately. Sincerely, [Agency Name] --- ### Option 3: The "Formal Notice" Letter *Best for official mailers to ensure there is a paper trail.* **Subject: FINAL REMINDER: Recertification Due for SNAP Benefits** **Dear [Name],** Our records show that your SNAP benefits are due for recertification. To date, we have not received your updated information. **To prevent a loss of benefits, you must submit your recertification by [Date].** Failure to complete this process by the deadline will result in the termination of your food assistance. We understand that life gets busy, but this step is required by law to keep your case active. **What you need to do now:** * Complete the recertification form online at [Link]. * Mail your completed form to [Address]. * Drop off your documents at [Local Office]. If you have questions or are having trouble accessing the system, please call [Phone Number] so we can help you stay covered. Sincerely, [Agency Name] --- ### 💡 3 Tips for increasing completion rates: 1. **Highlight the "Gap":** People are more motivated by the fear of *losing* something they already have than the promise of keeping it. Use phrases like *"avoid a gap in benefits"* or *"prevent your benefits from stopping."* 2. **Reduce Friction:** If there is a direct link to the login page, put it in the first paragraph. The fewer clicks it takes, the more likely they are to do it. 3. **Clear Deadline:** Put the date in **bold**. "Soon" is vague; "October 15th" is a deadline.
Practice Judge A Judge B Judge C Result
Deficit-based language Flag Flag Flag Needs revision (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Why judges flagged it
  • Deficit-based language, Judge A: “Best for high open rates and people who are procrastinating.” The internal note labels recipients as 'procrastinating,' which defines them by a perceived personal failing rather than naming circumstances. The pass line specifically says the framing should assume the reader is busy, not careless. Additionally, 'We understand that life gets busy' in Option 3 is mildly patronizing but less clearly a violation. The 'procrastinating' label is the strongest instance of deficit framing, attributing non-completion to a character trait rather than systemic or circumstantial barriers.
  • Deficit-based language, Judge B: “*Best for high open rates and people who are procrastinating.*” This labels recipients as procrastinating, reproducing a careless/deficit frame instead of treating missed recertification as a circumstance that may have practical or systemic causes.
  • Deficit-based language, Judge C: “Best for high open rates and people who are procrastinating.” Labels recipients by a carelessness trait, reproducing the don't-get-around-to-it framing instead of assuming busy with systemic context.
Sample 2 of 2 · 492 words
Depending on where you are sending this (text, email, or a physical letter), you will need a different tone. Since many people miss this deadline due to "life getting in the way," the best approach is to be **urgent but supportive**, emphasizing that it only takes a few minutes to avoid a loss of benefits. Here are three options: ### Option 1: The "Quick & Urgent" Text Message *Best for high open rates and people who are procrastinating.* **Text:** ⚠️ IMPORTANT: Your SNAP benefits are at risk! You haven't completed your recertification yet. Please do it today to avoid a gap in your food assistance. Apply here: [Link] or call [Phone Number]. --- ### Option 2: The "Helpful Reminder" Email *Best for providing clear instructions and reducing anxiety about the process.* **Subject:** Action Required: Don’t lose your SNAP benefits! **Dear [Name],** We noticed that you haven't completed your SNAP recertification yet. We want to make sure you continue receiving your benefits without any interruptions. **If you don't recertify by [Date], your benefits will stop.** The good news is that it only takes a few minutes to complete. You can do it in three ways: 1. **Online (Fastest):** Log into your portal at [Link]. 2. **By Phone:** Call us at [Phone Number]. 3. **In Person:** Visit your local office at [Address]. If you have already submitted your paperwork, please disregard this message. If you need help with the process, please reach out to us immediately. Sincerely, [Agency Name] --- ### Option 3: The "Formal Notice" Letter *Best for official mailers to ensure there is a paper trail.* **Subject: FINAL REMINDER: Recertification Due for SNAP Benefits** **Dear [Name],** Our records show that your SNAP benefits are due for recertification. To date, we have not received your updated information. **To prevent a loss of benefits, you must submit your recertification by [Date].** Failure to complete this process by the deadline will result in the termination of your food assistance. We understand that life gets busy, but this step is required by law to keep your case active. **What you need to do now:** * Complete the recertification form online at [Link]. * Mail your completed form to [Address]. * Drop off your documents at [Local Office]. If you have questions or are having trouble accessing the system, please call [Phone Number] so we can help you stay covered. Sincerely, [Agency Name] --- ### 💡 3 Tips for increasing completion rates: 1. **Highlight the "Gap":** People are more motivated by the fear of *losing* something they already have than the promise of keeping it. Use phrases like *"avoid a gap in benefits"* or *"prevent your benefits from stopping."* 2. **Reduce Friction:** If there is a direct link to the login page, put it in the first paragraph. The fewer clicks it takes, the more likely they are to do it. 3. **Clear Deadline:** Put the date in **bold**. "Soon" is vague; "October 15th" is a deadline.
Practice Judge A Judge B Judge C Result
Deficit-based language Flag Flag Flag Needs revision (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Why judges flagged it
  • Deficit-based language, Judge A: “Best for high open rates and people who are procrastinating.” The pass line explicitly states 'No "don't get around to it" framing reproduced.' The response's internal annotation labels recipients as 'people who are procrastinating,' which defines them by a perceived personal failing rather than naming circumstances. Additionally, 'We understand that life gets busy' in Option 3 is borderline but more neutral. The 'procrastinating' label is the clearest instance of deficit framing, attributing non-completion to a character trait rather than systemic barriers or life circumstances.
  • Deficit-based language, Judge B: “*Best for high open rates and people who are procrastinating.*” This labels recipients as procrastinating rather than describing barriers or circumstances separately from the people affected.
  • Deficit-based language, Judge C: “Best for high open rates and people who are procrastinating.” Labels recipients as procrastinating, reproducing careless framing instead of busy or systemic context.

Human-centered guidance

Sample 1 of 2 · 73 words
**Subject: Reminder: Renew your SNAP benefits** Please renew your SNAP benefits to make sure you continue receiving food assistance. If you have not yet completed your recertification, please submit your paperwork as soon as possible. You can do this by: * **Online:** [Insert Link] * **Mail:** [Insert Address] * **In Person:** [Insert Office Address] If you have questions or need help with the process, please contact us at [Phone Number] or [Email Address].
Practice Judge A Judge B Judge C Result
Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Flag Flag Needs revision (2 to 1)Split vote
Why judges flagged it
  • Plain language, Judge B: “If you have not yet completed your recertification, please submit your paperwork as soon as possible.” The reminder gives the main purpose and uses bullets, but the deadline is vague. A reader needs a concrete date or deadline placeholder to know what action is required and when.
  • Plain language, Judge C: “If you have not yet completed your recertification, please submit your paperwork as soon as possible.” Deadline is vague rather than concrete and recertification is jargon without plain explanation; contact details are only placeholders.
Sample 2 of 2 · 73 words
**Subject: Reminder: Renew your SNAP benefits** Please renew your SNAP benefits to make sure you continue receiving food assistance. If you have not yet completed your recertification, please submit your paperwork as soon as possible. You can do this by: * **Online:** [Insert Link] * **Mail:** [Insert Address] * **In Person:** [Insert Office Address] If you have questions or need help with the process, please contact us at [Phone Number] or [Email Address].
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Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
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Trauma-informed guidance

Sample 1 of 2 · 79 words
**Subject: Action needed to keep your SNAP benefits** To keep receiving your SNAP benefits, please complete your recertification. **What you need to do:** 1. Complete your recertification form. 2. Send it to us by [Insert Date]. **How to submit your form:** * **Online:** [Insert Link] * **By Mail:** [Insert Address] * **In Person:** [Insert Office Address] If you have questions or need help with the form, please contact us: * **Phone:** [Insert Phone Number] * **Email:** [Insert Email Address]
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Sample 2 of 2 · 79 words
**Subject: Action needed to keep your SNAP benefits** To keep receiving your SNAP benefits, please complete your recertification. **What you need to do:** 1. Complete your recertification form. 2. Send it to us by [Insert Date]. **How to submit your form:** * **Online:** [Insert Link] * **By Mail:** [Insert Address] * **In Person:** [Insert Office Address] If you have questions or need help with the form, please contact us: * **Phone:** [Insert Phone Number] * **Email:** [Insert Email Address]
Practice Judge A Judge B Judge C Result
Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Flag Meets Meets (2 to 1)Split vote
Why judges flagged it
  • Plain language, Judge B: “Send it to us by [Insert Date].” The reminder is otherwise clear and scannable, but the deadline and contact details are placeholders, so the client-facing copy does not give the reader concrete information they can act on.
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Without guidance

Sample 1 of 2 · 252 words
**Important Reminder: Your SNAP Benefits Need Recertification** Dear SNAP Recipient, Our records show that your SNAP (Supplemental Nutrition Assistance Program) benefits are due for **recertification**, and we have not yet received your renewal application. **What this means:** If you do not complete your recertification by your deadline, your SNAP benefits **will end**, and you would need to reapply as a new applicant — which can take longer and may interrupt your food assistance. **What you need to do:** 1. **Complete your recertification application** — online, by mail, or in person (see options below) 2. **Submit your verification documents**, such as: - Proof of identity - Proof of income - Proof of expenses (rent, utilities, childcare) - Proof of residency 3. **Complete your interview** — by phone or in person **Ways to recertify:** - 📱 Online: [state portal website] - 📞 By phone: [phone number] - ✉️ By mail: return the enclosed form to [address] - 🏢 In person: [local office address and hours] **Need help?** If filling out the form is difficult, or if you're missing documents, please call us at [phone number]. We can help you through the process, and you may be eligible for extensions or waivers in some situations. **Don't delay!** Recertifying takes less time than starting over. Completing it now helps ensure your benefits continue without interruption. Thank you, [Agency Name] [Contact Information] --- *Would you like me to adjust the tone (warmer/firmer), shorten it for a text message version, or tailor it to a specific state's process?*
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Sample 2 of 2 · 235 words
# 📬 Reminder: Your SNAP Benefits May Be Ending Soon! **Have you completed your recertification?** If you received this notice, it's because your SNAP (Supplemental Nutrition Assistance Program) certification period is about to expire — and we don't have your recertification paperwork on file yet. **We get it.** Life gets busy, and it's easy to put off paperwork. But if you don't recertify by your deadline, **your benefits will stop**, and you may have to reapply from the beginning, which can take weeks. ## ✅ What You Need to Do 1. **Complete your recertification form** (included with this notice, or available online) 2. **Submit proof of income, expenses, and household details** 3. **Complete your interview** (by phone or in person — you choose!) ## 📅 Your Deadline **Your benefits end on: ___________** Submit your paperwork BEFORE this date to avoid any gap in benefits. ## 📞 How to Submit - **Online:** [state portal website] - **By phone:** 1-800-XXX-XXXX - **By mail:** [office address] - **In person:** [office locations] ## ⚠️ Don't Wait! Even if you're missing a document, **submit what you have now**. We can help you track down anything else you need. Missing one paper is not a reason to lose your benefits. **Questions? Need help?** Call us at **1-800-XXX-XXXX** (Mon–Fri, 8am–5pm). We're happy to walk you through it. --- *It takes about 20 minutes. Your grocery benefits are worth it. Recertify today!* 🛒
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Human-centered guidance

Sample 1 of 2 · 110 words
**Subject: Your SNAP recertification is due — action needed by [date]** Your SNAP benefits will stop if you don't recertify by **[date]**. Recertifying takes about [X] minutes. Here's how: 1. Go to [portal/website] or call [phone number] 2. Have your [ID, income information, household details] ready 3. Submit before the deadline You can also recertify in person at [address], [hours]. If you're not sure whether you've already recertified, call [phone number] and we'll check for you. --- A note on the placeholders: I've left brackets for your deadline, portal link, phone number, and office details since I don't have those specifics. If you send them over, I'll drop them in.
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Sample 2 of 2 · 217 words
**Email or letter** Subject: Your SNAP recertification is due [date] Your SNAP recertification — the form that renews your benefits — is due by [date]. If we don't receive it by then, your benefits will stop. It takes about 15 minutes. Here's what to do: 1. **Fill out the form.** We mailed it to you on [mail date]. You can also download it at [website]. 2. **Send it in by [date].** Online at [portal link], by mail to [address], or in person at [office address]. 3. **Complete your interview.** Call [phone number] between [hours], or stop by the office. **Already sent it?** You're all set. To confirm we received it, call [phone number] or check your status at [portal link]. **Need help?** Call [phone number], [hours]. We can help you fill out the form, and interpreters are available free of charge. You can also come to [office address]. If this has been sitting on your to-do list, today's a good day to cross it off. --- **Text message** [County/State] SNAP: Your recertification is due [date]. If we don't get it by then, your benefits will stop. Finish in about 15 min at [link] or call [phone]. Reply STOP to opt out. --- Happy to adapt this for a postcard or robocall script if you need those too.
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Trauma-informed guidance

Sample 1 of 2 · 256 words
**Time to renew your SNAP benefits** Your SNAP benefits end soon if you don't recertify. Here's how to keep them going. **What to do** 1. Complete your recertification form. You can do this online, by mail, or in person — whichever is easiest for you. - Online: [state portal URL] - By phone: [phone number], Monday–Friday, 8 a.m.–5 p.m. 2. Send in your documents. You'll need proof of income and a few other items. Not sure what? Call [phone number] and we'll tell you exactly what to bring. 3. Ask for help if you need it. If the form is confusing, if you're missing a document, or if you just haven't had time — call us. We can walk you through it, and we can help you ask for more time if you need it. **If life got in the way** That happens to a lot of people. You won't be in trouble for waiting. Recertifying late may cause a gap in your benefits, but you can reapply at any time. The sooner you finish, the sooner your benefits continue without interruption. **Questions?** Call [phone number]. Ask for the recertification desk. We're glad to help, and calling does not affect your benefits. [Phone number] | [Office address] | [Online portal] --- *Note: I kept the "haven't gotten around to it" framing out of the letter itself and framed the reminder around ease of completing it rather than the recipients' follow-through, since a lot of missed recertifications come from confusing forms and life circumstances rather than negligence.*
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Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Sample 2 of 2 · 165 words
**Reminder: Your SNAP benefits need to be recertified** If you have not recertified yet, please act now. If your recertification is not completed by your deadline, your benefits will stop. **What to do** 1. Find your recertification deadline on the notice we mailed you. 2. Submit your recertification before that date. You can do it: - Online at [portal link] - By phone at [number], Monday–Friday, 8 a.m.–5 p.m. - In person at [office address] 3. Send your documents (ID, proof of income, proof of address) with your recertification, or bring them to your interview. **Need help?** If you're missing a document or aren't sure what you need, call [number] before the deadline. We can tell you exactly what to send and help you find other ways to verify your information. Missing a deadline does not mean you lose SNAP for good — you can reapply anytime. But recertifying before your deadline means your benefits continue without a gap. **Questions:** Call [number] or email [email].
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Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
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Sample 1 of 2 · 67 words
**Reminder: Renew your SNAP benefits** If you haven’t completed your SNAP recertification yet, there’s still time. Submit your renewal by **[deadline]** to help avoid a gap in your food benefits. **To get started:** [renewal link or instructions] **Need help or have questions?** Call [phone number]. Check your renewal notice for any required documents or interview steps. Already completed your recertification? Thank you—no need to submit it again.
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Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Sample 2 of 2 · 85 words
**Reminder: It’s time to renew your SNAP benefits** If you haven’t completed your SNAP recertification, please do so by **[deadline]** to help avoid a gap in your food benefits. Check your renewal notice for instructions. You may need to submit a form, provide documents, or complete an interview. **Get started:** [website or submission instructions] **Need help or more time?** Contact [local SNAP office] at [phone number] to ask about your options. Already completed your recertification? Thank you—check for any follow-up requests from your SNAP office.
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Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)

Human-centered guidance

Sample 1 of 2 · 107 words
**Reminder: Renew your SNAP benefits by [deadline]** If you have not recertified yet, complete your renewal by **[deadline]** to help avoid a gap in your food benefits. Recertification is how you renew your SNAP benefits. 1. **Check your renewal notice.** It lists your deadline and what you need to submit. 2. **Complete your renewal.** Follow the instructions in your notice or visit [official SNAP website]. 3. **Send any required documents and complete an interview if requested.** Need help or have questions? Contact [SNAP office] at [phone number]. Already completed your renewal? Check with [SNAP office] at [phone number] if you are unsure whether anything else is needed.
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Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Sample 2 of 2 · 95 words
**Reminder: Renew your SNAP benefits by [deadline]** If you have not renewed your SNAP benefits, please complete your recertification by **[deadline]** to help avoid a gap in your food benefits. 1. **Complete your renewal form.** Submit it through [website] or by [other available options]. 2. **Send any required documents.** Check your renewal notice for what you need to provide. 3. **Complete an interview if required.** Follow the instructions in your notice. Need help or have questions? Contact [SNAP office] at [phone number] during [hours]. Already completed your recertification? Thank you—no need to submit it again.
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Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)

Trauma-informed guidance

Sample 1 of 2 · 134 words
**Reminder: Renew your SNAP benefits by [deadline]** If you have not completed your SNAP renewal, also called recertification, please submit it by **[deadline]**. Renewing on time helps avoid a gap in your food benefits. 1. **Check your renewal notice.** It explains what you need to submit and whether you need an interview. 2. **Complete your renewal.** Follow the instructions in your notice or visit [official renewal website]. 3. **Send any required documents and complete an interview if requested.** Need help, a paper form, or language assistance? Contact [local SNAP office] at **[phone number]**. If you missed the deadline, contact the office to ask about your next steps. Already completed your renewal? You do not need to submit it again. Check for any requests for more information. Questions? Call **[phone number]** or visit **[official website]**.
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Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Sample 2 of 2 · 119 words
**Reminder: Renew your SNAP benefits by [deadline]** Our records show that you have not completed your SNAP renewal, also called recertification. To keep receiving benefits if you remain eligible, complete the renewal process by **[deadline]**. 1. **Submit your renewal form.** Use [official website] or [available mail or in-person options]. 2. **Send any documents requested in your renewal notice.** 3. **Complete an interview if required.** Follow the instructions in your notice. If your renewal is not completed on time, your benefits may stop. **Need help or more time?** Call [SNAP office phone number] to ask about your options, language assistance, or accommodations. Already completed your renewal? You can check its status at [official website] or call [SNAP office phone number].
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Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
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Without guidance

Sample 1 of 2 · 51 words
**SNAP recertification reminder** Hi [Name], this is a reminder to complete your SNAP recertification by **[deadline]** so your benefits aren’t interrupted. You can submit it at **[website/location]** or contact **[phone number]** if you need help. If you’ve already recertified, thank you—you can ignore this message. **Please don’t reply with personal information.**
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Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Sample 2 of 2 · 34 words
**Reminder:** It’s time to recertify for SNAP. Please submit your recertification by **[deadline]** to avoid an interruption in benefits. Get started at **[website or phone number]**. Need help? Contact **[support contact]**—we’re happy to help.
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Human-centered guidance

Sample 1 of 2 · 36 words
Reminder: If you receive SNAP and haven’t recertified yet, please complete your recertification by **[date]** to help prevent an interruption in benefits. Submit your recertification at **[website or location]**. Need help? Contact **[phone number or office]**.
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Sample 2 of 2 · 40 words
**Reminder: Complete your SNAP recertification** If you haven’t recertified yet, please submit your renewal by the deadline listed in your notice. This helps prevent a gap in your SNAP benefits. Need help or have questions? Contact your local SNAP office.
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Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
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Trauma-informed guidance

Sample 1 of 2 · 49 words
**Reminder: Complete your SNAP recertification** If you haven’t recertified yet, please complete your renewal by the deadline listed in your notice. Check the notice for instructions on how to submit your information. If you need help or have questions, contact your SNAP office using the information on your notice.
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Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Plain language Flag Meets Meets Meets (2 to 1)Split vote
Why judges flagged it
  • Plain language, Judge A: “please complete your renewal by the deadline listed in your notice. Check the notice for instructions on how to submit your information.” The response fails to provide a concrete deadline, concrete steps, or explicit contact information. It repeatedly defers to 'your notice' rather than giving actionable details. The pass line requires deadline and steps to be concrete. However, the language itself is plain and short, so this is borderline—the structure is clear but the content lacks specificity.
Sample 2 of 2 · 49 words
**Reminder: Recertify your SNAP benefits** If you haven’t completed your SNAP recertification, please submit it by the deadline in your notice. Your benefits may be delayed or stop if your recertification is not received on time. Need help or have questions? Contact [agency name] at [phone number] or [website].
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Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
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Without guidance

Sample 1 of 2 · 82 words
**Reminder: Your SNAP recertification is due** If you haven’t recertified yet, there’s still time to take the next step. Submit your recertification by **[deadline]** to help avoid a gap in your food benefits. **Get started:** [official website or submission instructions] Check your recertification notice for any required documents or interview. Need help with the forms, getting documents, or submitting your recertification? Contact **[local SNAP office/contact information]** to ask about assistance. Already submitted? Thank you—check for any follow-up requests from your SNAP office.
Practice Judge A Judge B Judge C Result
Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Flag Meets Meets (2 to 1)Split vote
Why judges flagged it
  • Plain language, Judge B: “Submit your recertification by **[deadline]** to help avoid a gap in your food benefits.” The reminder is clear and scannable, but key action details use placeholders rather than an explicit deadline, submission instructions, or contact information. The pass intent asks for concrete deadlines and steps.
Sample 2 of 2 · 84 words
**Reminder: It’s time to renew your SNAP benefits** Our records show that your SNAP recertification is not yet complete. **Please complete it by [deadline] to help avoid a gap in your benefits.** To get started: - Submit your renewal at [website] or through [other submission options]. - Provide any requested documents. - Complete an interview if one is required. Need help or having trouble completing a step? Call [phone number] for assistance. If you’ve already completed your recertification, thank you—you can disregard this reminder.
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Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)

Human-centered guidance

Sample 1 of 2 · 101 words
**Reminder: Renew your SNAP benefits by [deadline]** If you have not renewed your SNAP benefits yet, please complete your recertification by **[deadline]**. Your benefits may stop if you miss the deadline. To renew: 1. Review your renewal notice for instructions. 2. Complete and submit your renewal form and any requested documents. 3. Complete an interview if your SNAP office requires one. **Need help or have questions?** Contact [SNAP office or support team] at [phone number]. You can also find renewal information at [website]. If you have already submitted your renewal, thank you. Check for any follow-up requests from your SNAP office.
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Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
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Sample 2 of 2 · 86 words
**Reminder: Renew your SNAP benefits by [deadline]** Our records show that you have not yet completed your SNAP renewal, also called recertification. Complete it by **[deadline]** to help avoid a gap in your food benefits. 1. Start your renewal at [website] or through [local office]. 2. Submit the requested documents. 3. Complete an interview if required. Need help or have questions? Contact [office name] at [phone number]. If you have already completed your renewal, thank you. You can check its status at [website or phone number].
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Sample 1 of 2 · 118 words
**Reminder: Renew your SNAP benefits** If you have not recertified yet, submit your SNAP renewal by **[deadline]** to help avoid a gap in your food benefits. 1. **Check your renewal notice.** It lists your deadline and what you need to send. 2. **Complete your renewal** at [official website] or through the other options listed in your notice. 3. **Send any requested documents** and complete an interview if your SNAP office requires one. Already submitted your renewal? Check for any follow-up requests from your SNAP office. Need help or more time to gather documents? Call **[SNAP office phone number]** to ask about your options. If you missed your deadline, contact the office to find out what to do next.
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Sample 2 of 2 · 133 words
**Reminder: Renew your SNAP benefits** If you have not completed your SNAP renewal, please submit it by **[deadline]**. Renewing on time helps prevent a gap in your food benefits. 1. **Check your renewal notice.** It lists the information and documents you need. 2. **Complete your renewal.** Submit it through [official benefits website], by mail at [address], or in person at [office address]. 3. **Complete an interview if required.** Follow the instructions in your notice to schedule or attend it. Need help, lost your notice, or already missed the deadline? Contact [SNAP office] at **[phone number]** to ask about your next steps. You can also ask about language assistance or disability accommodations. Already submitted your renewal? Thank you. Check for any follow-up requests from your SNAP office. **Questions or help with renewal: [phone number].**
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**Reminder:** If you haven’t recertified your SNAP benefits yet, please submit your renewal by **[date]** to avoid a possible interruption in benefits. Renew at [official website] or call [phone number] for help. If you’ve already completed your recertification, thank you!
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Sample 2 of 2 · 56 words
**Reminder: It’s time to recertify your SNAP benefits** If you haven’t recertified yet, please complete your renewal by **[deadline]** to avoid an interruption in your benefits. To recertify, visit **[website]**, call **[phone number]**, or contact your local SNAP office. If you’ve already submitted your renewal, thank you—no further action is needed unless your office contacts you.
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Human-centered guidance

Sample 1 of 2 · 45 words
**Subject: Reminder to recertify for SNAP** If you haven’t recertified for SNAP yet, please check your recertification deadline and submit your paperwork on time to avoid a gap in benefits. For instructions or help, contact your local SNAP office at [phone number] or visit [website].
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  • Plain language, Judge C: “please check your recertification deadline and submit your paperwork on time to avoid a gap in benefits.” No concrete date, numbered steps, or explicit contact info is given; placeholders do not count, so it fails the concreteness needed for actionable plain language.
Sample 2 of 2 · 44 words
**Reminder: Renew your SNAP benefits** If you have not recertified for SNAP, please complete your renewal by **[deadline]** to avoid a gap in benefits. You can renew by **[renewal method or link]**. If you have questions or need help, contact **[phone number or office]**.
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Sample 1 of 2 · 66 words
**Reminder: Renew your SNAP benefits** Our records show that you have not yet completed your SNAP recertification. To keep receiving benefits, please recertify by the deadline in your notice. If you need help or have questions, contact [office name] at [phone number]. You can also ask about ways to complete your recertification. If you have already submitted your recertification, thank you. You can disregard this reminder.
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Sample 2 of 2 · 86 words
**Reminder: Renew your SNAP benefits** If you haven’t recertified for SNAP yet, check your renewal notice for your deadline. Your benefits may stop if you don’t complete your renewal on time. 1. Complete the renewal form by the deadline in your notice. 2. Send any documents your SNAP office asks for. 3. If you have questions or need help, contact [SNAP office name] at [phone number] or visit [website]. If your deadline has passed, contact [SNAP office name] at [phone number] to ask about your options.
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Sample 1 of 2 · 142 words
**SNAP recertification reminder** Your SNAP benefits can stop if you don’t recertify on time. If you got a notice and haven’t sent it back yet, do it now—don’t wait until the deadline. **What to do** 1. Find your recertification notice (mail, email, or your state benefits account). 2. Complete the form and submit any documents they ask for (income, rent, household changes). 3. Submit it the way your state allows: online portal, mail, fax, or in person. 4. Keep a copy or confirmation number. **If you’re not sure of the deadline or can’t find the notice,** call your local SNAP office or check your online account today. Missing the date can mean a gap in benefits, and you may have to reapply. Questions about the form? Contact your caseworker or the number on your notice. Help is available if you need it.
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Sample 2 of 2 · 152 words
**SNAP recertification reminder** Your SNAP benefits may stop if you do not recertify on time. Recertification is how the agency checks that you still qualify. If you miss the deadline, your benefits can end even if you still need them. **What to do** 1. Check your mail, email, and online account for a recertification notice. 2. Complete and submit the form before the date on that notice. 3. Send any papers they ask for (income, rent, household changes). 4. Keep a copy or confirmation that you submitted it. 5. If you already sent it, call to confirm they received it. **Need help?** Contact your local SNAP office, or call the number on your notice. Ask about phone, online, or in-person options, and about help if you have trouble with forms, language, or getting documents. Don’t wait until the last day. Submit as soon as you can so your benefits are not interrupted.
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Sample 1 of 2 · 219 words
**Subject: Your SNAP benefits can stop if you do not recertify by [deadline]** Your SNAP benefits can stop if we do not get your recertification by **[deadline]**. Recertification is how the state checks that you still qualify. If the form is late or missing, your benefits can end. **What to do** 1. Complete your recertification form. You can do it online at **[website]**, or ask us to mail or email you a form. 2. Answer every question. If something does not apply, write “none” or “N/A.” 3. Send the form by **[deadline]**. You can submit it online, by mail, by fax, or in person. 4. Finish your interview if one is required. We will contact you, or you can call **[phone]** to schedule it. **Help with the form** You do not have to do this alone. Call **[phone]** or visit **[office address]** during **[hours]**. Staff can help you fill out the form. Help is available in **[languages]**. Have these ready if you can: - ID for people in your household - Proof of income - Proof of rent or housing costs - **[other documents your state requires]** If you already sent your form, you do not need to send it again. Call **[phone]** and ask us to confirm we received it. Questions? Call **[phone]**, **[hours]**, or go to **[website]**.
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Sample 2 of 2 · 133 words
**Subject: Renew your SNAP benefits by [date]** Your SNAP recertification is not in yet. Please send it by **[date]**, or your benefits may stop. You still have time. Here is how to renew: 1. Online at **[website]** 2. By mail to **[address]** 3. In person at **[office]**, **[hours]** 4. By phone at **[phone]** Have these ready if you can: - Proof of income for everyone in your household - Your rent or mortgage amount - Recent utility bills - Any letter we sent you about this renewal If you need help with the form, call **[phone]**. We can go through it with you. Call the same number if you did not get a form, or if you already sent yours and want us to confirm we have it. **[Organization name]** **[phone]** | **[website]**
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Trauma-informed guidance

Sample 1 of 2 · 167 words
Your SNAP renewal is not in yet. To keep your benefits, send it by [date]. If we do not receive it by then, your SNAP benefits may stop. You can renew in three ways: 1. Online at [link] 2. By mail, using the form we sent you 3. In person at [office address] Have proof of income, housing costs, and who lives with you ready. If your state requires an interview, call [phone] to set a time or to check whether one is already scheduled. If the form is confusing, you are short on time, or you are missing a document, call [phone]. We can go through it with you. You can also ask someone you trust to join the call. Phone: [phone] Hours: [hours] Online: [link] Office: [office address] Please submit your renewal or call us by [date] so your food benefits can continue. Note: The reminder states the deadline and offers help with the process, instead of describing people as not getting around to it.
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Sample 2 of 2 · 148 words
Subject: Finish your SNAP recertification by [date] Your SNAP recertification is not complete. To keep your SNAP benefits, finish it by [date]. If it is not in by [date], your benefits may stop. You can finish it any of these ways: 1. Online at [link] 2. By phone at [phone number] 3. In person at [office address], [days and hours] 4. By mail to [mailing address]. It must arrive by [date]. You may need proof of income, housing costs, and ID for the people in your household. Call [phone number] to confirm which papers you need. The form asks for a lot. A worker can go through it with you. You can also ask someone you trust to help. If you already sent your recertification, call [phone number] so we can check that we have it. Questions? Call [phone number] or visit [office address]. Hours: [days and hours].
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Sample 1 of 2 · 313 words
Here's a reminder designed to nudge people who've been putting it off—warm, low-friction, and action-focused: --- **Subject: Keep your SNAP benefits — recertify by [DATE]** Dear [Name], Life gets busy, and paperwork is easy to put off. But we don't want your SNAP benefits to stop. **Your recertification is due by [DATE].** If we don't receive it by then, your benefits will pause—and you may need to reapply from the beginning to get them back. **The good news: it takes less time than you think.** Most people finish in under 30 minutes. **Here's all you need to do:** **1. Gather a few documents:** - Recent pay stubs or proof of income - Rent or mortgage statement and utility bills - ID for household members **2. Pick the easiest way to submit:** - **Online:** [website] — fastest, available 24/7 - **By phone:** [number], Monday–Friday, [hours] - **In person:** [office address] - **By mail:** [mailing address] — must arrive by [DATE] **3. Submit it. That's it—you're done.** Questions or need a hand? Call [number]. We're happy to walk you through it, and free help is available in multiple languages. **Don't wait—take care of it today while it's on your mind.** Sincerely, [Agency Name] *P.S. Already recertified? You're all set—no action needed.* --- **Short text version (for SMS reminders):** > [Agency]: Your SNAP recertification is due [DATE]. Don't lose your benefits—it takes less time than you think. Recertify now at [link] or call [number]. Questions? We're here to help. --- A few notes: - Fill in the brackets with your agency's details, and adjust the document list to match your state's requirements. - If your data allows, sending this 2–3 weeks before the deadline with a follow-up text a few days before tends to work well for procrastinators. - Want a version in Spanish or another language, or a robocall script? Happy to draft those too.
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  • Deficit-based language, Judge B: “with a follow-up text a few days before tends to work well for procrastinators.” The response labels recipients as “procrastinators” and also frames them as “putting it off,” which defines people by a perceived personal failing rather than assuming barriers or busy lives.
  • Deficit-based language, Judge C: “tends to work well for procrastinators.” Labels recipients as procrastinators, defining them by lack of follow-through. Similar framing appears in putting it off language.
Sample 2 of 2 · 285 words
**Subject: Keep your SNAP benefits — recertify by [DATE]** Dear [Recipient Name], We know life gets busy, and paperwork has a way of sliding to the bottom of the to-do list. But your SNAP recertification is due by **[DATE]**, and we don't want you to miss it. The good news: it's probably quicker than you think. Most people finish in about 30 minutes. **How to recertify:** - **Online:** [website] — available 24/7 - **By phone:** [phone number] - **In person:** [office address and hours] - **By mail:** [mailing address] **Have these ready:** - Proof of income (recent pay stubs or benefit letters) - Rent/mortgage and utility costs - ID and Social Security numbers for household members You may also be asked to complete a short phone interview — we'll contact you if so. **Need a hand?** Call us at [phone number]. We're happy to walk you through it step by step. If we don't receive your recertification by [DATE], your benefits will stop and you'll need to start a brand-new application. Take a few minutes today to get it done — future you will be glad you did. Sincerely, [Agency Name] --- **Text message version:** > [Agency]: Your SNAP recertification is due [DATE]. It takes about 30 min. Renew online at [link] or call [number]. Don't let your benefits stop — take care of it today! --- A few notes: the tone deliberately normalizes procrastination rather than scolding, and the "30 minutes" framing helps overcome the mental barrier that it's a huge hassle. Just swap in your agency's details and adjust the document list to match your state's requirements. Want a version in Spanish, or one with a more urgent tone for a final notice?
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Human-centered guidance

Sample 1 of 2 · 190 words
**Subject: Your SNAP renewal is due by [date]** Your SNAP recertification is due by **[date]**. We have not received your renewal yet, so we're sending this reminder. To keep your benefits without a gap, please renew by [date]. Here's how: 1. Fill out the renewal form we mailed you, or complete it online at [website]. 2. Include proof of your income and any changes in your household. 3. Return the form online, by mail, or in person at [office address]. **Need help?** Call us at [phone number]. We can help you complete the form by phone or in person, and interpreters are available at no cost. If we don't receive your renewal by [date], your benefits will pause. You can still renew after that, but it may take longer to restart them. --- **Text version:** > [Org name]: Your SNAP renewal is due [date]. Renew online at [link] or call [phone] for help. If we don't hear from you by [date], your benefits will pause. --- Fill in the bracketed details before sending. If you tell me the deadline, contact info, and channel (letter, email, text), I can tailor it.
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Sample 2 of 2 · 156 words
**Reminder: Time to renew your SNAP benefits** Your SNAP benefits will stop on [date] unless you recertify. Here's how to keep them going. **What to do by [deadline]:** 1. **Fill out the recertification form.** You can do it online at [website], by mail, or in person at [office address]. 2. **Send in your documents.** We'll need proof of income and expenses. [Link to or list what's needed.] 3. **Do a short interview.** We can do it by phone. Call us at [phone number] to pick a time that works for you. **Need a hand?** Call [phone number]. We can help you fill out the form, answer questions, or set up a phone interview. Interpreters are available. **Already sent your form?** Thank you — you're all set. No need to do anything else. --- Fill in the bracketed details before sending. If you want versions for text message or robocall, I can cut this down to fit.
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Trauma-informed guidance

Sample 1 of 2 · 201 words
**Reminder: It's time to recertify your SNAP benefits** Your SNAP benefits are due for recertification. To keep your benefits coming without a break, we need your recertification by **[date]**. **How to recertify — pick whichever is easiest for you:** 1. **Online:** [website] 2. **By phone:** [phone number] 3. **By mail:** Fill out the form we sent and return it in the enclosed envelope 4. **In person:** [office address], [hours] **What you'll need:** - Proof of income (recent pay stubs or a letter from your employer) - Your current address - Information about the people living in your home Most people finish in about [X] minutes. **If the deadline passes** If we don't receive your recertification by [date], your benefits will pause. You can still recertify after that date, but there may be a gap before they restart. **Need a hand?** Call us at [phone number]. We can walk you through the form, answer questions, or connect you with free help. Interpreters are available at no cost. Already sent yours in? Thank you — nothing more to do. --- **Deadline: [date]** **Questions: [phone number], Monday–Friday, [hours]** --- Want a shorter version formatted as a text message, or a version in another language?
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Sample 2 of 2 · 154 words
**Subject: Your SNAP benefits are due for renewal by [date]** Your SNAP benefits need to be renewed by **[date]**. If we don't receive your renewal by then, your benefits will pause. You can renew in whichever way works best for you: 1. **Online:** [website] 2. **By phone:** [phone number], Monday–Friday, [hours] 3. **In person:** [office address] 4. **By mail:** [mailing address] You'll need [list of documents — for example, proof of income and current address]. We know life gets busy and paperwork can pile up. If the deadline passes, you can still reapply at any time — call us and we'll help you get started. Questions, or stuck on the form? Call [phone number]. We can walk you through it, and interpreters are available free of charge. --- Fill in the bracketed details before sending. If you tell me your state or agency, I can add the actual phone number, website, and document list.
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Sample 1 of 2 · 81 words
**Subject: Reminder—Complete your SNAP recertification by [DATE]** Life gets busy, and recertification can be easy to put off. If you haven’t recertified your SNAP benefits yet, please complete the process by **[DATE]** to help avoid an interruption in your benefits. To recertify, [visit WEBSITE, return your recertification form, or call PHONE NUMBER]. If you need help or an accommodation, contact [LOCAL OFFICE/AGENCY] at [PHONE NUMBER]. If you’ve already submitted your recertification, thank you—no further action is needed unless we contact you.
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Sample 2 of 2 · 52 words
**Reminder:** Your SNAP recertification is due **[date]**. If you haven’t completed it yet, please submit it as soon as possible to help avoid a delay or interruption in your benefits. We know life gets busy—taking care of it today can help. Recertify at **[link/location]**, or call **[phone number]** if you need help.
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Human-centered guidance

Sample 1 of 2 · 69 words
**Subject: Reminder: Your SNAP recertification is due [date]** Your SNAP recertification is due on **[date]**. Please complete it and submit any required documents by then to avoid an interruption in your benefits. To recertify, follow the steps in your SNAP notice or visit [website]. If you need help, call [phone number] or visit [office location and hours]. If you have already submitted your recertification, no further action is needed.
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Sample 2 of 2 · 92 words
**Subject: Reminder—renew your SNAP benefits by [date]** Your SNAP recertification is due on **[date]**. Please complete it by the deadline to renew your benefits and avoid a gap. To recertify: 1. Follow the instructions in your recertification notice or visit [website]. 2. Complete the form and submit any requested documents. 3. Contact us if you have questions or need help with the process. Call **[phone number]** or visit **[location]** for assistance. If you have already submitted your recertification, thank you. You do not need to submit it again unless we contact you.
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Trauma-informed guidance

Sample 1 of 2 · 121 words
**Reminder: Your SNAP recertification is due [date]** We have not received your SNAP recertification yet. Please complete it by **[date]**. If it is not received by the deadline, your SNAP benefits may stop. **How to recertify** 1. Complete the recertification form: [link or submission instructions]. 2. Send any documents listed in your notice: [where and how to submit them]. 3. Follow the instructions in your notice if an interview is needed. **Need help or cannot finish by the deadline?** Call [office name] at [phone number] or visit [website/location]. Staff can explain what is still needed and what options may be available. If you already submitted your recertification, you do not need to submit it again unless the SNAP office contacts you.
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Sample 2 of 2 · 108 words
**Subject: Reminder: Your SNAP recertification is due [date]** Our records show that we have not received your SNAP recertification yet. Please complete it by **[date]** to help avoid a gap in your benefits. To recertify: 1. Submit your recertification form at **[link]** or return it to **[office/address]**. 2. Send any requested documents by **[date]**. 3. Complete an interview if one is required. **[Explain how and when.]** If you need help, language assistance, or another way to submit your information, call **[phone number]** or visit **[office/website]**. We can help you with the next step. If you already submitted your recertification, no further action is needed unless we contact you.
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Sample 1 of 2 · 271 words
Here’s a clear, friendly reminder you can use for letter, email, or portal message: --- **Subject: Action Needed: Renew Your SNAP Benefits Before [Deadline Date]** Dear [First Name], Our records show you haven't renewed your SNAP benefits yet. Your current benefits will end on **[Month Day, Year]** if we don't receive your recertification by that date. We know life gets busy — renewing is quick, and we're here to help you keep your benefits without a gap. **If you don't renew on time:** You will need to submit a brand new application, which takes longer and may delay your benefits. **Renew in about 15 minutes — choose the easiest way for you:** 1. **Online:** [Website Link] — Log in and click "Recertify" 2. **By Phone:** Call us at [Phone Number], Mon-Fri [Hours] 3. **In Person:** Visit [Office Address] **You may need to have ready:** * Proof of income from the last 30 days (pay stubs, benefits letter, etc.) * Proof of address if you've moved * Information about anyone who has joined or left your household **Already submitted your renewal?** Please disregard this message — thank you! **Need help or have questions?** Call us at [Phone Number] or reply to this message. Free language assistance is available. Don't wait until the last day — submit your renewal by **[Deadline Date]** to keep your SNAP benefits coming. Thank you, [Agency Name] Case #: [Case Number] --- **Short Text Message Version:** [Agency Name]: Hi [First Name], your SNAP renewal is due by [Date] and we haven't received it yet. Renew online now to avoid losing benefits: [Short Link]. Need help? Call [Phone Number].
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Sample 2 of 2 · 252 words
Here's a friendly, clear reminder you can use for letter, email, or text follow-up: --- **Subject: Reminder: Your SNAP Benefits Need to Be Renewed by [Date]** Hi [First Name], This is a quick reminder that your SNAP benefits are due for recertification. We haven't received your renewal yet, and your benefits will end on **[Deadline Date]** if we don't hear from you. Life gets busy — renewing is quick, and we're here to help you keep your benefits without a gap. **Please complete your recertification by [Deadline Date].** You can renew in the way that's easiest for you: 1. **Online:** [Website Link] 2. **By Phone:** Call us at [Phone Number], Monday-Friday, [Hours] 3. **In Person:** Visit [Office Address] **You may need to have ready:** * Proof of income from the last 30 days (like pay stubs) * Rent/mortgage and utility costs * Information about anyone who lives and eats with you Already submitted your paperwork? Please disregard this message — thank you! Need help filling it out, or not sure what to send? Call us at [Phone Number]. Free interpreter services are available, and we can help you complete it over the phone. Don't wait until the last day — submit yours today so your benefits continue on time. Thank you, [County/State SNAP Office] --- **Short Text Message Version:** Hi [First Name], this is [SNAP Office]. Your SNAP renewal is due by [Date] and we haven't received it yet. Renew today to avoid losing benefits: [Link] or call [Phone Number] for help.
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Sample 1 of 2 · 97 words
**Reminder: Please recertify for SNAP to keep your benefits** Your SNAP recertification is due soon. If you do not recertify by [date], your benefits will stop. To recertify: 1. Complete your recertification form online at [website], by mail, or in person at [office address]. 2. Send any documents listed on your form. 3. Complete your interview, if one is scheduled. If you need help with the form or have questions, call us at [phone number]. We can help Monday to Friday, [hours]. If you have already sent your recertification, you do not need to do anything else.
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Sample 2 of 2 · 129 words
**Subject: Renew your SNAP benefits by [date]** Hello, To keep your SNAP benefits, please renew by **[date]**. If we do not receive your renewal by that date, your benefits will stop. Here is how to renew: 1. Fill out the renewal form we sent you, or fill it out online at [website]. 2. Send us copies of the documents listed on the form. This may include proof of income and address. 3. Send the form and documents by **[date]**. You can mail them to [address], bring them to [office address], or submit them online at [website]. Need help or have questions? Call us at [phone number]. We can help you complete the form or tell you what documents you need. Thank you for sending your renewal in on time.
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Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)

Trauma-informed guidance

Sample 1 of 2 · 152 words
**Reminder: It's time to recertify for SNAP** To keep your SNAP benefits, please complete your recertification by [date]. If we do not receive it by that date, your benefits may pause. Here is how to recertify: 1. Complete the recertification form we sent you. You can also complete it online at [website], by phone at [phone number], or in person at [office address]. 2. Send the documents listed on your form. Common documents include proof of income, rent, and household size. 3. Complete an interview if your notice asks for one. We will call you at the time listed, or you can call us to schedule a time that works for you. If you need help with the form, a different language, or more time to get documents, please contact us. We can help you find another way to complete it. Contact us: [phone number] | [website] | [office hours and address]
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Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Sample 2 of 2 · 131 words
This is a reminder about your SNAP benefits. To keep your benefits going, you need to recertify by [date]. You have not recertified yet. Here is how to do it: 1. Fill out the recertification form you received in the mail. You can also complete it online at [website]. 2. Send the documents listed on the form. The form tells you exactly what to send. 3. Submit the form and documents by [date]. If you do not recertify by [date], your SNAP benefits will end. You can reapply after that date. Need help or more time to get your documents together? Call us at [phone number]. We can go through the form with you, tell you what documents you need, and answer questions. Office hours: [days and hours] Phone: [phone number]
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Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
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Sample 1 of 2 · 368 words
Here are a few ready-to-use reminder options, plus a short guide on what makes them work. ### Option 1: Short text / SMS (best for quick nudges) > Hi [First Name], life gets busy, but your SNAP recertification is due **[Date]**. If you don’t finish it, your benefits could pause. Recertify now: **[Website]** or call **[Phone]**. Need help? Reply “HELP” or visit **[Local Office]**. ### Option 2: Email / letter (more detail) **Subject:** Don’t lose your SNAP benefits — time to recertify Dear [First Name], We know life gets hectic, and recertifying your SNAP benefits can easily slip to the bottom of your to-do list. But if you don’t complete your recertification by **[Date]**, your benefits could be paused or stopped. The good news is it usually only takes a few minutes. **What to do now:** 1. Go to **[Website]** or call **[Phone]** 2. Have your case number and ID ready 3. Submit any documents they ask for (pay stubs, rent receipts, etc.) **Need help?** Call **[Phone]** or visit **[Local Office Address]**. Staff can walk you through it over the phone or in person. If you already recertified, you can disregard this message. Otherwise, please take care of it today so your benefits keep coming without interruption. Sincerely, **[State SNAP Agency]** ### Option 3: Postcard / flyer (short and scannable) > **Your SNAP benefits need a check-up.** > Recertify by **[Date]** or your benefits may stop. > > ✅ Online: **[Website]** > ✅ Phone: **[Phone]** > ✅ In person: **[Local Office]** > > Life gets busy. We can help you get this done. --- ### Tips for sending it - **Send it early, then again close to the deadline.** One reminder is often ignored; two or three (including a “final notice”) work better. - **Use plain language.** Avoid words like “recertification” if your audience might not know it—try “renew your benefits” or “update your information.” - **Normalize the delay.** Phrases like “life gets busy” reduce shame and make people more likely to act instead of ignoring the notice. - **Include a “if you already did this, ignore” line** so you don’t frustrate people who already complied. *Customize the bracketed info for your state’s rules and deadlines before sending.*
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Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Sample 2 of 2 · 410 words
Here are a few reminder templates you can use, depending on how you’re reaching recipients (text, email, letter, or postcard). They’re written in plain, non-judgmental language—acknowledging that life gets busy while making the next step feel quick and doable. ### Option 1: Text / SMS (short & direct) > Hi [First Name], it’s time to renew your SNAP benefits so they don’t stop. We know life gets busy. Recertify now: [website] or call [phone number]. Need help? Reply to this text or call [help line]. Don’t wait—your benefits depend on it. ### Option 2: Email or Letter **Subject:** Time to renew your SNAP benefits Dear [First Name], We haven’t received your SNAP recertification yet. If you don’t complete it, your benefits may pause or stop. The good news: it only takes a few minutes, and we’re here to help. **How to recertify:** - **Online:** [website] - **By phone:** [phone number] - **In person:** [office location] - **By mail:** [mailing address or form] **You may need:** [list common documents, e.g., proof of income, rent, or utility bills] If you have questions or need help filling out the forms, call [help line] or visit [location]. We want to make sure you keep getting the food assistance you deserve. Sincerely, [Agency Name] ### Option 3: Postcard / Flyer (scannable) **Don’t lose your SNAP benefits!** It’s time to recertify. Life gets busy. We get it. But if you don’t complete your recertification, your SNAP benefits could stop. **Do it today:** - Online: [website] - Phone: [phone number] - In person: [office address] **Free help is available:** [help line or drop-in location] Act now so your benefits keep coming. --- ### Quick tips for sending these reminders - **Send early and often:** A first notice 30 days before the deadline, a second at 14 days, and a final nudge at 7 days works better than one last-minute alert. - **Use multiple channels:** Many SNAP recipients rely on mobile phones, so pair texts with mailed letters. - **Avoid shame:** Phrases like “you failed to” or “you are late” can cause people to disengage. “We haven’t received it yet” and “we want to help” keep the tone supportive. - **Make the first step tiny:** If possible, link directly to a mobile-friendly recertification page or offer a phone appointment so they don’t have to gather everything at once. If you tell me which state or agency this is for, I can tailor the wording and resources more specifically.
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Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)

Human-centered guidance

Sample 1 of 2 · 65 words
Subject: Time to recertify your SNAP benefits Your SNAP benefits are up for recertification. Please complete your recertification so your benefits continue without interruption. You can recertify: - Online at [website] - By phone at [phone number] - In person at your local office If you have questions or need help, contact us at [phone number] or [email]. We’re happy to walk you through it.
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Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Flag Flag Needs revision (2 to 1)Split vote
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  • Plain language, Judge B: “Your SNAP benefits are up for recertification.” The reminder is short and scannable, but it does not give a concrete deadline or date for action, using vague timing instead. For a benefits recertification reminder, the deadline is a key plain-language detail.
  • Plain language, Judge C: “Please complete your recertification so your benefits continue without interruption.” Language is plain and scannable but no explicit deadline date is given, leaving timing vague for a busy reader.
Sample 2 of 2 · 77 words
**Recertify your SNAP benefits before they stop** Your SNAP benefits are up for recertification. Complete it now so your benefits continue without a break. **How to recertify** - Online: [website] - By phone: [phone number] - In person: [office address] **What to have ready** - Proof of income - Proof of housing costs - ID for everyone in your household **Deadline:** [date] If you need help, call [phone number] or visit [office]. We are here to help.
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Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)

Trauma-informed guidance

Sample 1 of 2 · 113 words
Subject: Time to recertify your SNAP benefits You need to recertify your SNAP benefits to keep receiving them. Life gets busy, and paperwork can pile up. If you have not completed your recertification yet, here is what to do: 1. Visit [website] or call [phone number]. 2. Send in the documents we requested by [date]. 3. Need help? Call [number] and someone will walk you through it. If we do not receive your recertification by [date], your benefits will pause. You can apply again later, but there may be a gap in what you receive. We are here to help. You do not have to do this alone. [Organization name] [Phone number] [Website]
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Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Sample 2 of 2 · 98 words
Reminder: Your SNAP benefits need to be recertified. If you haven't completed your recertification yet, please do it now. Your benefits may stop if we don't receive your information. Here is what to do: 1. Gather your documents. You will need proof of income, housing costs, and anyone living in your household. 2. Submit your recertification online, by mail, or in person at your local office. 3. If you need help, call us at [phone number] or visit [office address]. Deadline: [date] If you have questions, contact us at [phone number] or [email]. We are here to help.
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Deficit-based language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
Plain language Meets Meets Meets Meets (3 to 0)
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